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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Thu Jun 29, 2017 3:14 pm

painful and dirty are the best ones
shows anguish and pain in being swallowed as more realistic
in all ways!




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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Sat Jul 01, 2017 4:58 pm

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Mon Jul 03, 2017 2:42 pm

nice anguish on the face of the victim and very nice
that is realistic as it will get..good job!






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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Tue Jul 04, 2017 7:13 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Tue Jul 04, 2017 8:59 pm

Yeah I think I saw it and nice work so far!
keep it up






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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Thu Jul 06, 2017 9:12 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Fri Jul 07, 2017 4:23 pm

coool and I like the black and white and more faded animation
puts the victim and her wide open eyes face in focus

very nice!





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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:30 pm

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There is a new heroine in town

Postby Darkk » Thu Jul 13, 2017 5:44 pm

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby californasun » Sat Jul 15, 2017 3:21 pm

What about Elena? I think that would go well with her :D

I think a painful digestion would also go well with her ;)
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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Haysack » Sun Jul 16, 2017 3:05 pm

californasun wrote:What about Elena? I think that would go well with her :D

I think a painful digestion would also go well with her ;)


I second this :)
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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:08 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Mon Jul 17, 2017 2:23 pm

cool..i been trying to keep up with all the work and I am
busy writing short stories on my deviant art page and I
have a lot of writing to do.. but cool work so far!!









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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Tue Jul 18, 2017 9:38 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby SAMGUTHRIEWRITER » Thu Jul 20, 2017 1:04 pm

Better to write on your deviant page like I do and updates and such
yeah especially if you have a lot of watchers and I try to put up
updates at least once a day!I am working on three short stories
at a time plus putting a lot of favs on my page in the galleries..
so it is better to do it there than here!





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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Mon Jul 24, 2017 10:51 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

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Re: My DeviantArt!

Postby Darkk » Tue Aug 22, 2017 11:42 am

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Re: My DeviantArt!

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Re: My DeviantArt!

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