Sleepymezzy's "bedtime" stories~

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Sleepymezzy's "bedtime" stories~

Postby sleepymezzy » Sun Jul 02, 2017 7:22 am

Hello~

Re-purposed this thread due to the rules~

I've been a lurker for many years and I never thought I would make this kind of stuff.

Well, I did, and now I finished a comic and working on a second! I hope those who saw it enjoyed it!

V Story:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/403738

3000 For 1 (Not finished):
https://aryion.com/g4/view/404111

Right now I'm experimenting with special panels. Let me know what you guys think!
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Re: V Story - A Vore Comic

Postby sleepymezzy » Sun Jul 02, 2017 7:30 am

Here's the first three pages. Sorry about the sketchy quality of the first few panels: you'll see the sketchiness disappear pretty quickly over the next few pages. It's largely because I'm not actually used to drawing comic stuff.

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Re: V Story - A Vore Comic

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Sun Jul 02, 2017 8:13 am

It's a bit rough around the edges but honestly sometimes I like that especially when coupled with clever captions.
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Re: V Story - A Vore Comic

Postby sleepymezzy » Sun Jul 02, 2017 8:52 am

ryanshowseason3 wrote:It's a bit rough around the edges but honestly sometimes I like that especially when coupled with clever captions.


Thanks for commenting!

Yea, it's mainly because I don't focus on illustrative works or comics, if ever. It does get better even after the 3rd page (albeit still rough in some spots)...

I kind of like it too since it reminds me of one of my favorite (giantess-related) artists Uru, but I think I'll try to keep it cleaner next time!
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby gaggles88 » Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:17 pm

I love your style!

I'm more of a fan of monster vore.

Think you might make a monster under the bed comic sometime?
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby sleepymezzy » Sun Jul 02, 2017 6:18 pm

gaggles88 wrote:I love your style!

I'm more of a fan of monster vore.

Think you might make a monster under the bed comic sometime?


Maybe as a request sometime in the future!

Aside from that, here's pages 4-7 below.
(I'll be done updating this thread in regards to this current comic and use it later for my other ones!)

Hope you all enjoy~
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby Hanzo » Sun Jul 02, 2017 8:32 pm

Yeah, its pretty good. Micro and Macro isnt really my thing, nor is fatal, but this is still pretty good.
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby sleepymezzy » Mon Jul 03, 2017 2:53 pm

Hanzo wrote:Yeah, its pretty good. Micro and Macro isnt really my thing, nor is fatal, but this is still pretty good.


Thanks!
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby sn0riat » Mon Jul 03, 2017 7:40 pm

Your stuff is super awesome! I can't get enough of it XD. You popped out of nowhere and immediately do such a huge project. I seriously respect that! Keep it up! It's one of my most favourite comics on ekas already x3. I can't await to see what else youll do!
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Re: V Story - My First Vore Comic

Postby sleepymezzy » Tue Jul 04, 2017 3:44 am

sn0riat wrote:Your stuff is super awesome! I can't get enough of it XD. You popped out of nowhere and immediately do such a huge project. I seriously respect that! Keep it up! It's one of my most favourite comics on ekas already x3. I can't await to see what else youll do!


Thanks! I hope you will enjoy the next one~
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