A newbie adobe illustratorer in desperate need of criticism.

[mysteriousthing]

Greetings, so it turns out I have a thing for navel vore. I haven't uploaded many things on Eka's Portal and have moved on from pencil and paper to adobe illustrator. However, as I am inexperienced in AI (well, with normal art as well) I am at a bit of a fix as to what to do with my sad, strange little career as a vore artist with a very specific fetish. Right now I am just coming up with characters before I do actual vore.

Here are is the "art" I have done in illustrator:

First, my more traditional character,

Then here's the first of my 'Symbiotic' characters,

Some constructive critiques from pro AI users or anyone with good tips will be greatly appreciated.

[DirtyMac]

You seem to have a good grasp on basic lighting, but your proportions could use some work. (First one seems like the arms are too small for the torso, and second one's torso just seems to bend way too much.) Keep trying. You're getting there.

[rabbidrabbid]

Like the other guy said, your proportions could use work. In the first picture, the left breast is a different size from the right one. I also think that your faces could use some major reworking. You can definitely get better with practice, though!