Long Time Lurker, First Time Poster.
I've always been inspired by a lot of artists here and decided out of the blue to try my hand at vore art after some light study of the artists I was attracted to the most.
I'm going for a more cutesy, cartoonish style of art because that's what appeals to me, but even in that realm I have a lot of work to do.
Honoring all the artists I loved and looked at would take a very long time but I must give lots of attention to BleedingStalker, whose work I copied the most in trying to find a way to illustrate I liked.
Very nice to meet you all and I hope to contribute as much as I can in the future.
Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
A sequel!
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hunnypuppy - New to the forum
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
Well, you're off to a cute start, but your text could use more legibility.
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Birichino - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
I like it, the captioning pulls it together. It was marginally hard to read but I managed.
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ryanshowseason3 - ???
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
Birichino wrote:Well, you're off to a cute start, but your text could use more legibility.
ryanshowseason3 wrote:I like it, the captioning pulls it together. It was marginally hard to read but I managed.
Yes and thank you! Writing on tablet is still pretty difficult for me, but I thought doing bubbles would take too much space from the background and since text is the last layer I do I went rather fast because I just wanted the piece over. I tried a bit slower this time and increased the contrast with a second darker line of text underneath (and using more desaturated colors for the backdrop). That hopefully helps it pop a bit more, but it might be something that I need to just practice with more for the sake of legibility.
Now that I'm typing this though I realize I made a mistake by writing it out twice when I could have just made a copy of the text, recolored it and scaled it up to save time and probably look neater, whoops!
Anyways, here's another two parter:
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hunnypuppy - New to the forum
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
Still around! Here's a quick sketch of something a bit more stylized, hoping to move more in this direction going forward.
No text this time, but hopefully I'll have more art to show off soon.
No text this time, but hopefully I'll have more art to show off soon.
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hunnypuppy - New to the forum
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Re: Hunnypuppy's Vore Funhouse
When it comes to putting text on a picture, I know a few artists who will transfer the final picture to Photoshop and create text bubbles for the words. That way you can just type the words out if writing on a tablet is difficult. ^^
You're off to a good start with your art. Keep it up and you'll become better and better. c:
You're off to a good start with your art. Keep it up and you'll become better and better. c:
In our darkest of days, we will see the light. Those who follow it shall conquer, and those who don't shall vanish.
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