Story: The Wish
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Story: The Wish
Here is a short story I have written. It's fairly simple, but I think people will be able to enjoy it. It features F/M, consensual, fatal, some mentions of digestion but not described, magic..
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Re: The Wish
It seems exactly like what I was expecting, based on your description. Some of the themes are not my cup of tea, but it seems to be of a similar quality to many other stories on Eka's about consensual same-size, fatal soft-Vore. I am sure many people will enjoy reading your stories! I especially liked the minor story twist you added, even if some people will find it implausible.
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