I made my first vore audio, with a drawing and some text to accompany it and am looking for feedback. Do you like the sounds, does the text work well or is it annoying? Any other criticisms or thoughts are welcome.
The drawing is also my first to post on this site, so any feedback there is fine too .
Click the link for the file.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/417177
(M/unspecified, feral soft vore, Eagle)
I made my first Vore Audio!
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I made my first Vore Audio!
Writing a vore novel. Check out an excerpt over in work to be shared!
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