My First Vore Comic

[JuicyPickle]

I know my art is terrible. I have never posted porn online before, or drawn much for that matter. On top of that my drawing tablet is glitch as hell. If someone out there with time and taleny would like to color or re draw my comic so it is sexy and beautiful and easier to jack off to. Please be my guest and re color or draw it. I don't know what I am doing. Also zoom in to see the comic. it's long.

[Eka]

Keep up the good work!

[Bigblue]

Looking good, keep it up.

[gullvy]

Considering that you say that you haven't drawn much, it actually looks really good! Keep it up, and I'm sure you will see plenty of improvement!

There was one or two panels where I couldn't really see what was going on, but other than that, it's perfectly serviceable fetish material :p

[wolfgangclockwork]

i approve of the comic

[1ring42]

All I could see was a fractal checkerboard.

[BizzareBlue]

Wow, this is certainly not terrible. The lines might be a bit scratchy at times and it might be worth fiddling with the pressure and opacity settings of your brush to make them a little less hard but it is still a really great comic. The postures and anatomy are really good and it tells a pretty awesome story. Great work.

[sweetladyamy]

For a first shot, not bad, not bad at all. Definitely good rubbing material.

[1ring42]

I really wish I could read it.

[Bright]

Consider splitting the file into several seperate pages. That might make it easier to read.

I think it is a good start.
Keep it up.

[Bowyer2]

I unable to get a better look of your work. Could you have it sort it out for me please?

[JuicyPickle]

I am sorry if you are having trouble viewing it here. This link will take you to a pornhub page I have also posted it on. https://www.pornhub.com/photo/280977492

[DevHauer]

Hey at last you can draw! My comics are all shot in Second Life. <_<;; But don't be so self-critical, you can create something!