I started posting my stories here last year, and now that I have a new chapter out, I keep worrying about the quality of releases. So if anyone has time (and also because I want to plug my gallery) please read my stuff and offer what advice you can. Grammar mistakes, flipping tense, tonal inconsistency, whatever needs improvement. I know there has to be something, I'm just too close to this forest to see the trees.
https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/wizkid17
Thanks so much
New gallery
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Re: New gallery
I guess I should say what I've written about if I want people to read my stuff. Derr.
I do M/M, M/F, and F/F so far, with Anal, Oral, and Cock Vore. Lots of gay sex, male and female, and some cum inflation. Digestion is avoidable and when it happens shit happens.
I have 4 regular stories so far and one comissioned posted, with another commission in the pipes and more regular stories soon following. I hope you like them.
I do M/M, M/F, and F/F so far, with Anal, Oral, and Cock Vore. Lots of gay sex, male and female, and some cum inflation. Digestion is avoidable and when it happens shit happens.
I have 4 regular stories so far and one comissioned posted, with another commission in the pipes and more regular stories soon following. I hope you like them.
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