cub4444 wrote:These are actually pretty good. It's not my taste.. I prefer boys being eaten by men, but you definitely know how to draw.
hey thanks! my tastes fluctuate over time, i've been into men eating boys from time to time or women eating boys or women eating men or men eating women or men eating girls -- so at some time in the future i might draw such a thing, maybe!
but somehow this is what i always gravitate back to
on an unrelated note, attached is a silly thing i made to experiment with different things i hadn't done before / hadn't done in a long time
because most of the things in it are things like that, on the whole it is not a very good silly thing
but it's a silly thing nonetheless which is why i want to share it
the comic thing:
self critique:
things i know i got wrong in this:
- no one has clothes! this is NOT just how these characters are or anything, it's just that clothes weren't really part of what i was experimenting with. i thought about going back and adding them when i was done but my hand hurts too much ;-;
- elijah's appearance keeps changing all over the place
- matt is basically zero effort -- it's not that i care less about him, i do want to develop him more, it's just that by around the time i started introducing him my hand was already getting tired -- and also idk i feel like the shapes in his body are... harder to draw? harder to get right somehow? i'm too used to drawing shotas :'( oh well, practice practice etc; actually you have no idea how many tries it took just to get the face right, i wanted him to be definitively both much older and much more masculine than elijah but also not to such an extent as to render him ridiculous and unworkable as a character; you know what i mean, i wanted him to be very definitely a guy but still a cute guy rather than some big hulking monster or something... but i feel like the monster is kind of what he wound up being anyway goddammit
- the line thickness keeps changing -- that's because i drew it all on one gimp image at various zoom levels and had to copy the individual panels out of the image and scale them down by different amounts -- will try to figure out what to do about this next time
- it's not really especially that much about vore?? the vore isn't the focus, it has more to do wITH THE FUCKINg MSUTACHE JOKE
- elijah's goofy giggling face at the end is actually lokwey scary af
- the hand sticking out of his mouth at the beginning is a little too big
- i wanted to develop matt more than i wound up doing in terms of character bUT: i couldn't figure out how to make it fit with the format of the goddamn mustache joke :'( maybe next time
- THE BEAGLEPUSS LOOKS LIKE DR ROBTONOIK LFMAO
- the door open the wrong way
edit i know everyone knows this stupid juoke but it's just that it was making me cry from laughing earlier adn i had to do a thing about it because i was horny / felt like drawing smut but i couldn't think about hot things all i could think of was "i mustache you a quedstion but i'll shave it for later" and the whole time i was drawing this i had this dumb fucking big doofy ear to ear grin on my face
fun fact: the thing matt is reading actually says something
or, did, before it got scaled down
here is what it says
Mateo,
The attached intake forms need to be sorted and filed to the inboxes of the appropriate blah blah work blah blah patients regarding the blah blah the other day my sister's cat blah blah blah to be fair you have to have a very high IQ to understand Rick and Morty
-- Warden