Collier's Thread!

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Collier's Thread!

Postby delete8234b » Mon Apr 02, 2018 4:23 am

UPDATED 4-17-18

NOTE: I created this as a Thread so I'd be able to not only update it with new content once it comes out, but also because it's the rules to create one thread instead of spamming all of your works! This thread will get updated as often as I am capable of doing so! That said, also know that my writing regarding the implementation of dialogue can be a bit erroneous. Your feedback on how to improve my writing format and your comments on what you thought of my stories is greatly appreciated!


  • Based off of a RP scenario, it tells the story of Collier encountering a large woman named Thara. He decides to help her out, and she decides to help him out in return. Link: https://aryion.com/g4/view/450934
  • This is my first story I've made from scratch! The plot centers around Collier being kept awake one night due to the fear that something is not quite right...
    Link: https://aryion.com/g4/view/453075
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