Proof Reader Wanted for Next Chapter of "FF/f" Story

[Gershwin]

So, I'm looking for someone (or maybe two people) to proof-read and comment on the next chapter of "The Perks of an Amazonian Girlfriend" before I publish it. I'll even throw in a small reward for putting the work in

The first two parts can be found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/355505

Part three is smaller than the first two as it's basically how I wanted to end part two but ran out of time.

See the first two parts tags to get a gist of the themes.

My preference is a female forum member who enjoys the themes in this story, since all the characters in this story are female and it is centered around their relationship and interaction, I'm really looking for some non-male-centric feedback or comments. I won't ignore you if you don't meet those criteria, but preference will be given to those that do.

Let me know via PM or comment here if you're interested.

[Gershwin]

Never mind, I've posted the next part anyway: https://aryion.com/g4/view/454816