My first real fantasy genre undertaking

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My first real fantasy genre undertaking

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Thu May 10, 2018 8:06 pm

Fairly recently I wrote something in the fantasy genre I'd like wider opinions on beyond people who are already fans. I'm worried just heaps of praise will just become my own echo chamber where I'd like to learn to grow.

I went for a sanderson-esque type deal if you're familiar with the author.

Anyways let me know what you think!

And thanks for reading!

https://aryion.com/g4/view/456171
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