Devourer (story in progress)

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Devourer (story in progress)

Postby TheiaLoki » Wed Jun 27, 2018 2:55 pm

At around the last day of July last year, I started writing what is intended as a horror story called Devourer. While soft-vore is featured, the content is far more narrative-driven than fetish-based.

It follows a sporty senior high school student named Vanessa Gourmet, also the second child of the co-owners of a Catering & Hotel Business, who after recovering from an abrupt case of amnesia begins to undergo a horrifying and unexpected change affecting her biology as well as her growing appetite. While having to manage to keep this unsettling new hunger under control and kept incognito with the help of her friends, things don't turn out to be as easy to keep a lid on as planned due to would-be gossip seekers at school, small-time criminals in the city, and things that don't go 'bump in the night' in a good way.

Here are the current chapters thus far.
[Chapter 1]
[Chapter 2]
[Chapter 3]
[Chapter 4]
[Chapter 5]
[Chapter 6]
[Chapter 7]

Chapter 8 is still work in progress and intended to be the end of the first act of the story. Sadly, progress on it has been slow due to work at school, work at... work, as well as real-life matters.
On the plus side, once this is fully written out and finished I intend to revise where necessary and add in extras such as details on the setting and things that are both known and not known about the other characters and such. Heck, if I can get around to it, I intend on posting artwork showing the characters from the story itself.

All and all, this was something that feels like it'll be bigger than I'd initially intended. Enjoy ;)
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