Hello there writers of Eka's Portal. I decided to create this little thread because of a few problems I think we as writers run into.
We don't get much critique here. And maybe we might not even need it. I mean as long as we write "Freddie's grand cock gaped open and gulped down the party goers." Or "Rachel unhinged her jaw and engulfed Eric who had been tressed up as the Thanksgiving turkey." we will have fans. As long as we appeal to our niche and our audience. But I think as writers we need to help each other out.
So I decided that we should have a personal critique corner. Because writers fill a special niche here on Ekas. Our readers give us a chance. They decide to read our stories. I think we owe it to ourselves and them to write the best stories we can.
So, post stories you need help with or come to just discuss ideas you have and wanna talk out. Or just come to talk writer things.
Writer's Critique Corner
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This section is for any artist, writer, animator, or any form of creation to share their work in order to receive comment to improve themselves better.
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This section is for any artist, writer, animator, or any form of creation to share their work in order to receive comment to improve themselves better.
Read the rules in detail here
Read the Critiquing suggestion here
Please open only one thread per person. Detail here.
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Re: Writer's Critique Corner
I'd really love if someone could give this piece (macro/micro, M/F soft vore with implied digestion) a critique. I wrote it a year ago and have since churned out more content on and offsite, but I'd really love to see if there's anything I can improve on for future pieces. <3
- TinyMouse
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I love this idea! I'll keep an eye on this thread.
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Brazzel - Been posting for a bit
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When the writer's group fell apart, I was very sad. it was very good to keep me writing instead of being always busy with other things. With school in season, there's could be some free time.
- Tassie
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I'd love some critique on this piece.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/474628
Features F/m, willing, giantess, endo, as well as character focus, nerdy references (I hid four references to other books, props to whoever recognizes all four, only one real vore scene, and a cheezey ending. It's not only my first vore piece, but my first piece of writing that I really shared with anyone.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/474628
Features F/m, willing, giantess, endo, as well as character focus, nerdy references (I hid four references to other books, props to whoever recognizes all four, only one real vore scene, and a cheezey ending. It's not only my first vore piece, but my first piece of writing that I really shared with anyone.
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calldahotline - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Writer's Critique Corner
i have no idea when i'm gonna be putting stuff out again but i might as well keep tabs on this
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Slayerhero90 - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Some feedback on my stuff would be nice! https://aryion.com/g4/view/478807
This one's my most recent, just be sure to read the tags first to see if it's something you're interested in.
This one's my most recent, just be sure to read the tags first to see if it's something you're interested in.
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EmissaryOfRainbows - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Writer's Critique Corner
i'm also sometimes concerned that what i write and upload here might not be up to snuff--part of it is simply because it's vore hentai and there's only so many different ways you can write out how characters have sex (or, indeed, how a woman may swallow someone as big as she is). i'll have to remember to come back here and put out some critique requests; been meaning to do some new rewrites of older chapters, anyway, so maybe that'll be my opportunity (i want to write in accents for some of the characters as demonstrations of the translation convention, since the characters are Japanese but the story is written in English, and to change up the setting just slightly to establish for myself that it takes place in the same universe as another writing project of mine that i'll never upload here)
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Writer's Critique Corner
Critique thread? Awesome! Here's something I've been working on.
Unfinished, but it's what I have. It was supposed to go along with an image that I never finished.
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Unfinished, but it's what I have. It was supposed to go along with an image that I never finished.
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shhhyoudontknowme - New to the forum
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I like giving a good critique of stories I like - it helps the authors write better stories, which means I'll enjoy them more, and can help the authors to become more popular. I don't get why more people don't do it - I'm often interested in seeing what other people think of a story that I like or dislike, beyond an upvote or downvote.
I only really like feral stuff though, so there aren't that many fics that I'd want to read to give a critique of.
I only really like feral stuff though, so there aren't that many fics that I'd want to read to give a critique of.
- Speedyblupi
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Re: Writer's Critique Corner
Speedyblupi wrote:I like giving a good critique of stories I like - it helps the authors write better stories, which means I'll enjoy them more, and can help the authors to become more popular. I don't get why more people don't do it - I'm often interested in seeing what other people think of a story that I like or dislike, beyond an upvote or downvote.
i think most people here on Eka's operate on the unspoken rule of "if you don't have anything nice to say, then don't say anything at all". i know that i myself just move on if i find something i don't like in the various galleries rather than flaming people. kinda helps and hurts, since usually no one gets offended but it also means there's little to no constructive criticism, either. makes this critique thread all the more important.
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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