This is my first time writing vore. I tried to be descriptive and emotional to make it feel engaging. This is not a feel good story. There are graphic descriptions of pre-digestion, gore, mild hard vore and soft vore. Please tell me what you think here or on my DA. Thank you!!!
https://www.deviantart.com/justdesserts ... -783682157
I also just got my gallery up and running! You can also find my story there https://aryion.com/g4/view/507029
My first vore story
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