My first vore story

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My first vore story

Postby TinyHands » Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:20 pm

This is my first time writing vore. I tried to be descriptive and emotional to make it feel engaging. This is not a feel good story. There are graphic descriptions of pre-digestion, gore, mild hard vore and soft vore. Please tell me what you think here or on my DA. :) Thank you!!!

https://www.deviantart.com/justdesserts ... -783682157

I also just got my gallery up and running! You can also find my story there :D https://aryion.com/g4/view/507029
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