My first comic

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My first comic

Postby sonnytheking » Sat Feb 02, 2019 6:23 am

Hello, this is my first comic.
I'am new to drawing, started about 2 month ago, so i will appreciate your feedback.

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Plus here some other drawing i made
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Re: My first comic

Postby extremelydevious » Sat Feb 02, 2019 11:23 pm

I think you need to go digital, your handwriting is, not bad, but illegible for comics, like, a bad font, also it bounces around like a child who has only just learned cursive, thats the thought it invokes in my mind and thats not a good thing for vore art XD

But your heaps better than when i started last year, i think (hard to say since we also draw differently), and you seem to have the shots pretty well put together.

Anyway, if you were waiting to hit some level or something first i think its safe to say you are there. You should go and buy yourself a tablet.
keep drawing comics but try to be more diverse with your angles, poses, etc, i think youll learn and improve pretty quickly.

Also keep working on your backgrounds, they are well structured, heaps of great artists i see suffer from shit backgrounds, and while not great, i am among those too, im in a place where its usually better to leave it blank than try to put characters somewhere because i do it so badly its distractingly bad.

Anyway, good going 8)
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Re: My first comic

Postby sonnytheking » Sun Feb 03, 2019 3:45 am

You are right about the handwriting, it always was a problem for me.
As for digital drawing i already thought about it, but plan to learn to draw well first, before investing in a tablet.
I am now learning to use shading, hopefully the next comic willl be better :D

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Re: My first comic

Postby Tassie » Sun Feb 03, 2019 3:42 pm

Unless you've been drawing 24/7 these last two whole months, that ain't bad.

I tried painting, but I couldn't afford to keep going, so I gave it up, but even the short time I did that in art class, I got better by doing it. You're off to a good start, and if you keep going, you'll improve, likely very fast.
Best help will maybe be practising anatomy and proportions? I don't know, sorry.
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