New Writer sharing his work

[Lenny]

https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/Lenny

I've started ~3 weeks ago after lurking for multiple years. Has been really fun so far, although I still feel like I've got a lot to learn. Writing stories has been a part of me for quite a while but stories of this kind still take time getting used to, at least that is my personal experience so far.

I'd really appreciate feedback to my work, since I'm looking to improve. Think I already got a fair bit figured out with each new story, but another point of view might just be what I needed.

My work almost exclusively consists of Unbirth so far, the mostly wholesome kind, but I'm planning to start writing oral vore soon as well.

[ArrowversePreds]

Hey,

While I don't feel like I'm best suited to comment on an Unbirth story as I don't really know what should be written to intrigue people in a story like that, please let me know when you start writing about oral vore. While I only have a year's worth of experiance, I will hopefully be able to give some advice.

Good luck with all your stories!