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"Smelly Relaxation" Animation Finished!

Postby Saxanas » Tue Apr 30, 2019 4:47 am

*Also Contains Farting*

Lovers of anal vore enjoy ;)

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php? ... 80af4388a8
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Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby Saxanas » Tue Apr 30, 2019 4:55 am

*Animation Contains Anal Vore and Farting*

Seeing as it's encouraged to only have one thread here, I decided to make this the official thread for all my future work. And what better way than to start it off with my first complete animation! Please let me know what you all think of it, and how I can continue to improve. You guys have been so kind to me considering how new I am here, so I only want to provide you with the best possible content I can. Enjoy!

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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby FatMMD » Wed May 01, 2019 12:09 am

The animation is top notch no doubt. In terms of feedback, I think the camera shake between 00:08 - 00:15 were a little bit excessive and that there was no additional squelch when she stuck her hand out of the anus. Again those were minor criticisms of a very good animation. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby Saxanas » Wed May 01, 2019 1:56 am

shardez wrote:The animation is top notch no doubt. In terms of feedback, I think the camera shake between 00:08 - 00:15 were a little bit excessive and that there was no additional squelch when she stuck her hand out of the anus. Again those were minor criticisms of a very good animation. Keep up the good work!


Even though they are minor like you said, this is incredible feedback! I encourage you to get nitpicky because I really want to provide you guys with the best possible content I can give. Thanks for being honest with me, and for caring enough to give such great criticism. I will definitely improve from this =)
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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby Exdeath27 » Thu May 02, 2019 8:17 am

any other sites that you could upload other than pornhub? My country banned that site :(
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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby Saxanas » Sat May 04, 2019 5:04 am

Exdeath27 wrote:any other sites that you could upload other than pornhub? My country banned that site :(


Oh I’m sorry about that. I’m not currently home at the moment. But tomorrow when I return I will upload it to another site right away so you can watch it! I’ll message you when I do so.
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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby Saxanas » Tue May 07, 2019 4:50 am

Exdeath27 wrote:any other sites that you could upload other than pornhub? My country banned that site :(


Sorry for the late response, but I did upload the animation to xvideos as well! Here's the link:

https://www.xvideos.com/video47728237/smelly_relaxation
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Re: Saxanas's Animation Thread

Postby MamayAdesu » Tue May 07, 2019 10:29 am

Saxanas wrote:
Exdeath27 wrote:any other sites that you could upload other than pornhub? My country banned that site :(


Sorry for the late response, but I did upload the animation to xvideos as well! Here's the link:

https://www.xvideos.com/video47728237/smelly_relaxation


x-ray/internal-view version please? :)
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