Frog vore internal
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Frog vore internal
Hmmm... this one went not so good. I wonder how to make frog looking less hollow inside without making the prey smaller.
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PeculiarArt - Been posting for a bit
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Re: Frog vore internal
I would have studied the anatomy of both the predator and the prey, and taken slight liberties to make sure they fit together (literally). For example, the biggest crime I see from this picture is a complete lack of a skeleton or other internal organs outside of the stomach.
- OrcaVoreIsBestVore
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Re: Frog vore internal
well - I'd start by balling the prey up and moving her down and to the left - same physical mass, and scale - just squeeze her limbs in to her body)
at the moment, she occupies the entirety of the frog... when the entirety of a frog needs to be occupied by, lungs, heart, ribs, guts... not just stomach.
At the moment - she's stretched out and she doesn't look like she's in a tight space at all.
Doing this will make the frog look less hollow
at the moment, she occupies the entirety of the frog... when the entirety of a frog needs to be occupied by, lungs, heart, ribs, guts... not just stomach.
At the moment - she's stretched out and she doesn't look like she's in a tight space at all.
Doing this will make the frog look less hollow
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Riraito - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Frog vore internal
I actually really like it if you can get over the weird vastness of the cavernous stomach.
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tst12 - Participator
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Re: Frog vore internal
I can't do much more other than say ditto to what the others have said so far, and that while the internal space could have been better, everything else about this is amazing, and the piece is still really good if you ask me
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