Pelican Story needs proofreading. Also, another question.

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Pelican Story needs proofreading. Also, another question.

Postby Tassie » Fri Aug 09, 2019 12:19 am

I was in a hurry to get this done for today, and before I knew, it was already late on 8/8, but my boy is in bed, the house is quiet and I put a last few touches on this story.

Tales of the Grand Pelicans - Chapter 3: Sunny Fat Beach
https://aryion.com/g4/view/544814

Contains vore, giant pelicans, BBW and other things I'm too tired to list, sorry.

Since this summer has been unbelievably busy, sadly, I had to rush this. I know there are errors that I missed, so I'm asking that that one or two people from the board proofread this for me. I wish I could offer to pay for the help, but even two jobs isn't enough to earn much extra, sorry. I will, however, gladly note a thanks in the story description.
Please send any corrections to me via Private Note, thank you.




ALSO
I feel like this story is a lot longer than it needs to be. Writing takes a great deal of time, so I want to know, would it be worth my time to rewrite a shorter version of this story?
Please post responses here.

Thank you all so very much.
-TH
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