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Help with shading!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Thu Jan 09, 2020 11:43 am

Wow here it is!
I'll be posting my comics here for criticism!

(Anything older than the newest one will just be a link, only the newest will be viewable on here, so as to not make this post ridiculously long.

Petra Brings Lunch! Which of these Shading Styles Is better?
(also any advice on shading would be much appreciated)

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Ashley Commits a Crime (F/F, Oral, Same Size, BBW)

https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573120-97953-413eym-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573729-97953-52njv4-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573879-97953-5dq2bt-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/574387-97953-68wd5c-preview.jpg


A Wail Of A Time (F/F, F/?, F/Pokemon, Oral Vore, Weight Gain, Smaller Pred, BBW)
Requested by https://www.deviantart.com/killifishy (He draws cool stuff)
(This is with some new fancy Faber Castell Pencils. That I can't sharpen, because my sharpener doesn't have stronk)

https://aryion.com/g4/view/576112
https://aryion.com/g4/view/576277#item-itself
https://aryion.com/g4/view/576296#item-itself

Gardevoir Gut (F/F, F/? Pokemon/F Oral Vore Weight Gain, BBW, Digestion)

https://aryion.com/g4/view/584202
https://aryion.com/g4/view/584290
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby Straxacore » Thu Jan 09, 2020 11:53 am

Very nice :)
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby Bright » Thu Jan 09, 2020 8:44 pm

I like how you work on different angles. I think you're off to a pretty good start.
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby sweetladyamy » Thu Jan 09, 2020 9:42 pm

Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby SamuelOrona » Thu Jan 09, 2020 10:44 pm

You definitely have talent, I like your artistic style. You should draw on Bristol board in pencil and ink over it, Faber-Castell Pitt pens have India ink and a set of four has four different sizes, including a brush pen to fill in large areas.

Have you ever considered macro/micro F/m vore?
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby Litenosöt » Sun Jan 12, 2020 12:29 am

I really like your style too, but have you ever considered hard vore? :D
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby tombaker » Sun Jan 12, 2020 7:24 am

Very good, good luck in further growth:D
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Sun Jan 12, 2020 9:56 am

sweetladyamy wrote:Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...


"quick"
ha
hahahah
HAHAHAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

I wish
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Sun Jan 12, 2020 9:59 am

SamuelOrona wrote:You definitely have talent, I like your artistic style. You should draw on Bristol board in pencil and ink over it, Faber-Castell Pitt pens have India ink and a set of four has four different sizes, including a brush pen to fill in large areas.

Have you ever considered macro/micro F/m vore?


Thanks for the advice!
Also macro or micro aren't really my thing, i may do it on ocassion, but the closest i'd do on a regular basis is probably,
70% same size or bigger prey
20% Small size difference
10% Macro Micro

But seriously, thanks for the advice, i had no idea what literally all of those words were until now.
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:03 am

Litenosöt wrote:I really like your style too, but have you ever considered hard vore? :D


1. Thanks!
2. I have but i probably won't do it very much.

EDIT:

Just now realised that aryion doesn't give you a notification when someone replies on your thread.
Also realised i didn't need 3 posts to quote multiple things woops
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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby sweetladyamy » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:38 pm

DefinitlyOrginal wrote:
sweetladyamy wrote:Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...


"quick"
ha
hahahah
HAHAHAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

I wish


What I meant was that it's just carbon to paper, nothing fancy or anything. 'Simple line art' may of been a better fit but quick sums it up better.

In any event, keep at it. Practice makes better.

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Re: My first vore comic!

Postby digestor » Mon Jan 13, 2020 12:09 pm

i like it :)
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Re: Edit: Second Vore Comic!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Sat Jan 18, 2020 1:42 pm

A Wail Of A Time (F/F, F/?, F/Pokemon, Oral Vore, Weight Gain, Smaller Pred, BBW)
Requested by https://www.deviantart.com/killifishy (He draws cool stuff)
(This is with some new fancy Faber Castell Pencils. That I can't sharpen, because my sharpener doesn't have stronk)

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Re: Help with shading!

Postby DefinitlyOrginal » Wed Feb 26, 2020 5:09 pm

Bump
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Re: Help with shading!

Postby sweetladyamy » Wed Feb 26, 2020 8:32 pm

I say whichever of the two you like best.

The latter of the two looks nicer, but the former provides more shadow.
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