New story idea. WIP

[Squatchin]

Started writing a new story. Just looking for opinions on whether its worth finishing and/or ideas to include.

WARNING: Suggested teenage prey and suggested sexual acts. If its not your cup of tea, you've been warned and do not need to read any further or comment.
Also, I am not a pro writer so my grammar and punctuation may be a little off. If you want to correct me, I encourage it but please don't do it in a negative way.

Here's what I have so far:

Tara's Christmas Meal(s)
The holidays were fast approaching and Jon had no idea what to get his wife. She had everything, literally! Being a predator was very profitable. Not only was she paid well for contract work, but she claimed ownership of everything that her prey owned upon digestion. No, he would have to think hard and long about this gift. As November neared its end, Jon still had not thought of anything that would make a great gift. Her only real passion in life was her job. She absolutely loved to eat. That was it! He would provide her with the best meal ever on Christmas day! Not just one meal though, breakfast lunch AND dinner! Because of her work, Tara was able to stuff herself regularly with adult prey but, her absolute favorite was teen girls. She couldn't get enough of them. Nor could Jon for that matter because, whenever she was actually contracted to take care of a tasty teen girl, Jon always got to "play" with her food beforehand. This could be a great gift for the both of them! Now he just had to figure out where to get the unfortunate girls. Since he was not a predator, he had to abide by the normal laws and would be in serious trouble if he randomly kidnapped several teens. Homeless girls wouldn't be very appetizing as they needed far too much preparation before making a good meal. Then it occurred to him, adoption! The local adoption agency was always over flowing with orphans needing a good home. Teenage girls were especially tough to place because of their moodiness and rebellious nature. He could apply for a handful of girls and if approved, take Tara to pick out her dinner! Of course they wouldn't let the agency know what was in store for the orphans. Under the law, if a predator decided to eat their children, it was perfectly acceptable. And that included adoptee's.

[anjelika]

Very good.

[AllSwalloAndNoChew]

This is the internet, so yes it's safe to say you will find an audience for your work no matter what it is. So if your primary interest is simply being able to share work with a like minded group, you're good o go.

If you happen to want to reach a wide audience for a potential commercial purpose however; I think there are 2 albeit connected points you might want to consider that could affect your client/ reader pool.

1) People love to be able to inject themselves into their fantasies as much as possible; the more specific you make a scenario in porn, the fewer the people that can inject themselves. Think of any rape festish video on pornhub; most are very generic setups like a teacher/ lawer walks into a room and gets raped by x/y/z whatever the setting, thers a lot of background info left out which you can fill in yourself. So it might be an idea to scale back some of your set/up world building to this end e.g

2) The scenario is potentially too real/ hits too close to home; think of the difference between playing manhunt which, while incredibly violent and disturbing, you can separate yourself from guilt and enjoy it because all the events and characters are fictitious vs say, playing a game as Ted Bundy stalking his next victim, the latter is a bit raw. Someone being unwillingly eaten is one thing cause there's a lot of context you can give that; but, abusers finding loop holes in the legal system to find new victims? That shit happens everyday.

I have heard of totally legal places in Japan where you can go role play raping someone underage as realistically as you want, and it's all above board because it's just rp. You could potentially make it something like that, where the whole thing is legal and above board e.g. the girls work for a company that specialists in matching preds with prey and they know what they're getting themselves into and you can leave it ambiguous as to whether they later reform and get paid, or if this is just as much their ideal scenario as the preds etc. Think of how you can Give as many readers that ambiguity/ out to involves them as much as possible while still achieving what you want to with the work is the name of them game

It's still just a fantasy at the end of the day and as angelica has already proven, yeah you have an audience for the idea the way it is. Just some food for thought