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Latest: Round girl (willing anal vore, fatal)

Postby AVF » Mon Nov 22, 2021 9:26 pm

I am sorry if my posts aren't great, I am new here and just want to entertain users : )

I am an ordinary adult at the age of 25. I have the usual thing like work, and an unusual class about human anatomy. I work at Krogers and I live somewhere in California. I have always had this weird fascination about a particular sexual activity, one called Anal Vore. In this activity, one participant may be labeled the "prey" and the other the "predator" and it involves the prey being inserted onto or crawling into the anal cavity of the predator. The one that I like is where the prey does not want to be swallowed by the predator, but is forced to anyway. In my scene, the predator gets the prey to go feet first in order to make the prey watch itself disappear without any way of escape. Kind of like a power move , I guess except the prey gets asphyxiated in the predators rectum and never comes back out. Well I learned from my anatomy class that the colon can actually fit another human inside of it. The predator needs to be really tall and fat, and the prey needs to be short and skinny. The predator may be able to stretch it's anus to fit the prey inside, and maybe wider if the prey is going to struggle to not vanish. Since no such scenario exists, I assumed that this activity was impossible, regardless of how many people wanted to be a predator and take someone into their ass, or how many people wanted to be forced to disappear into someone's thicc ass, that this feat was thoroughly impossible. Well this decently fat and thicc classmate of mine had seen that I was researching anal vore and had met me outside to talk. He asked me that since I was pretty short and skinny and he was pretty tall and thicc, if I wanted to go to his house and try it (even though we both knew it was impossible). I said sure, and asked if we could do it in his bathtub so that I could get his feces off of me easily once we stopped, and that even if we managed to get me into him until my neck, that he not push me the rest of the way in (of course, I did not ACTUALLY want to die that way). He said yes, we could and that he'd push me out after. He asked me if I wanted to try it that night after he was off work (he said at least after 5pm, and I would be off at 5 as well.). I obliged and we both departed to our works. I did my usual stuff as a cashier, remember produce codes, go around the counter for stuff that was too heavy to be picked up, I pet dogs and such. I was anxous the whole day, as I couldnt wait to try anal vore for real. I dreamed about it since I can't even remember when. Well, 5pm finally came around and I checked out for the day. I decided to go straight to his house, as I wasn't worried what I was wearing (I was about to wear shit, after all). He was already at his house, and I guess he had work closer to his home. Well, I got in and sat on the couch beside him. I guess he was anxous too, because he already had a bottle of lube in the bathroom and was asking me to follow him there off the bat. I followed him to his bathroom. He closed the door and I was horny so I asked him to take my clothing off. He did, with shaky hands and then he used lube and a toy to get his ass stretched. It looked pretty big and I thought I might get my shoulders in there no problem. He asked me if he or I was to cover myself in lube. I wanted him to, so he stood me in his tub and sprayed me layer after layer with slimy lube until I was so slippery I could hardly keep upright. He asked me if I was going to try and get myself into him or if he would push me in. I wanted him to push me in, as it was the closest thing to my favourite, involuntary, as I could possibly get (It required my cooperation to perform this task, as it was impossible or nearly impossible). He held me by my waist, layed in the tub and put my feet against his pucker. He applied the necessary pressure on them for them to start going in, innitiating the vore. I felt a lot of tightness, and it was difficult for him to get a bigger part of me in, but when my feet were halfway in, the width of that part of me suddenly getting more narrow forced them into his ass (because his pucker muscles were extremely strong). He got me up to my knees, I said keep going if you can. He got me to my waist and I thought it was going quite well. He asked me if I wanted to go further, until my shoulders, as he felt he could go on. I said surely yes, and so he made his pucker travel further and further along me and sent me further and further into him until his pucker gripped my shoulders. I asked him if he wanted to get me in to my neck, and if he wanted to let his ass slip over my shoulders and close on my neck. He said yes to both, and I could feel him getting noticeably more exited as his ass started to clench more and he was pretty tense. He poked my head in until his ass started to slip me in. He stopped pushing and let it do his work. I zoomed quickly into him, pressures gave way to allow for it and in the blink of an eye, his sphincter wrapped tightly around my neck. It kind of felt heavy and slimy like quicksand. I nutted due to exitement, filling his colon with a bit of white cum. He didn't nut yet, and I asked him why not, but he was silent. I asked if he was quite done and wanted to get me out, but still, silence. He said that I wouldn't be getting out of this, and i knew i was in trouble so I panicked. I tried to push one of my shoulders out, but his ass only curved and squished to adjust to the pressure. His ass had a huge round lump due to my shoulder, but it was too strong to let my shoulder out. I said please let me out, but still, he lay silent. Finally, he reached down to me, angled my face upward and pushed on my forehead with his index finger. I thought it wouldnt be strong enough, but i felt myself slipping in further and further. Eventually my face was completely level with his pucker. He told me that ever since he met me in that class, he had been wanting to get rid of me because I was competition to him. He also said that ever since he met me outside, he had been planning this as a disposal method. He said nothing more to me after that, though I screamed and squirmed in an attempt to escape, but my struggles only took me deeper in. I realized this, so I stopped, but he started to stroke his dick. I felt pucker after pucker, as he was readying to nut, but none of them made me go further. He finally nutted, and I felt a suction inside of him as he quaked, and his ass pucker so hard I thought it would crush me. But the suction conjoined with his ass's strength pulled me further and eventually, his ass slipped over my face, effortlessly sliding me fully into him, getting his ass to consume me and fully dispose of me forever. Since no one had heard our conversations or my screams as I neared my demise, he got away with it without trouble.
-the end.

I hope you enjoyed and I hope you will be nice as this is one of my first actual writings. (This story contains absolutely no real details about me or my job.)

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Re: Detailed anal vore

Postby SunsetSteady » Mon Nov 22, 2021 11:26 pm

Pretty alright, besides some grammatical errors and overly-formal vocabulary, I like the premise.
I write those dang ol stories! Check it out at my userpage!
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Re: Detailed anal vore

Postby AVF » Tue Nov 23, 2021 12:53 am

SunsetSteady wrote:Pretty alright, besides some grammatical errors and overly-formal vocabulary, I like the premise.

Thanks for your feedback :)
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Re: Detailed anal vore

Postby Hawkeye7 » Wed Nov 24, 2021 8:40 am

Great work, loved the premise and the style. As others have said, just a few updates and it would be perfect. Look forward to your future work!
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First person anal vore disposal

Postby AVF » Thu Nov 25, 2021 2:19 am

Your name is Jennifer Asgon, and you are an immigrant to the United States of America from Japan. Your height is about 4.5 feet, and you work at a restaurant called Red Robin. You have a normal life as anyone would, you get up early, get ready for work, get a coffee and work all day long. When you get off of work, you are always exhausted and sweaty having worked in a hot kitchen all day. Though not many customers actually come to this location in person, lots order food to their houses. Every Wednesday is a "down day" as all workers are expected to show up still, but no customers come into the building. Well, you have worked hard for the entire week, but you noticed that everyone has been looking at you kind of funny. You barely even noticed though, as everyone towers over you. Well Wednesday came along and this time a staff meeting is called. You haven't actually been to the office yet, and you really want to find out what it is like. The manager, who is a 6ft3in tall plump dark female shouts "Staff meeting! Please proceed to the basement." and you didn't think it would be in the basement but sure enough, everyone goes through a door that leads downstairs into a basement. Everyone proceeds and you follow, as you want to follow in someone's footsteps. When everyone is downstairs, you hear someone close the door. You take a guess and think it's just for privacy. You proceed and see that everyone is sitting at a long white table, so you sit down too. You see the person who closed the door come downstairs, and you notice that he slipped a key into his pocket. You are curious, so you turn your head to face the door. You see a heavy brass padlock preventing the door from being opened. You ask everyone "Guys, why did he put a lock on the door?", and you look at everyone to see them all smiling almost maliciously at you, and you get freaked out. You get out of your chair to try and open the door, though you know you will not have any luck. You nervously head back downstairs as you had no luck opening the door, and see that everyone has stood up and the manager is tapping her foot. You try to go and get the key from that guy, but someone grabs you and binds your hands very fast. You do not see this person, but they are holding onto you very tightly. You hear someone else walk up from behind you, and they hit you in the back of the head with what felt like a hammer. This knocks you unconscious, but not before you see the manager smile very creepily at you and taking her clothes off to reveal dark chocolate colored skin and a thick jiggly ass. You drift away, and what feels like seconds passes before you wake up. Well, kind of. You are in a lot of pain and your vision is blurred, you realize that you are naked and you feel a tight pressure surrounding your legs. Someone is holding you by your waist and pressing you down into this tight feeling, and you look down to see only your legs which end at dark skin. Your vision clears up, but you are still in a lot of pain. You look at your legs again, but see that your feet are completely engulfed by your manager's ass. You try and move your feet but without any success, and the manager says "Ah yes, Jennifer is finally awake. I wouldn't want you to miss this." You think to yourself for a second, and remember that you are tied up so that you cannot move. You realize that the person holding your waist is pushing you deeper into the manager, and shifts their hands to push down on your shoulders. Your manager says that the team at the restaurant has been wanting to get rid of you this way since you had talked to them last. You think to yourself, "get rid of me? What?" and it finally clicks in your head that they are going to push you into your manager's ass until you disappear completely. You manage to blurt out "please" and the manager says "Stop for a sec, Lawrence." You assume that Lawrence is the person pushing you down. Your manager says "Jennifer, every since you started working here I have noticed just how useless you are around here. I thought for a while, but I decided to get rid of you. I have been looking a possibilities of a disposure, since nobody else should have to deal with you if I simply fired you. Honestly, I was thinking of weighing you down in quicksand, so you sank and disappeared that way. I was feeling horny though, and started looking at how flexible and squishy and tiny you are, and while you were handling food, a brilliant idea popped into my head. "Food. She should be food." And while I was pondering how I should consume you, I farted and felt my butt plug slip in and vanish. So, I chose anal vore for you, and you should consider yourself lucky. Not that you have any choice anyway, because now you are a sacrifice to my hunger and pleasure." You think about it for a second and she says "Lawrence, continue pushing. I want Jennifer here in until her shoulders in five minutes." You hear Lawrence speak for the first time. "Yes, ma'am." You see him smile at you and continue pushing. You finally stopped staring at her ass in horror as it slowly swallowed you and you look around to see the rest of the team sitting and watching, some smiling, some masturbating to the rare scene. You look back down to see that your knees are gone, and the manager's ass is getting up to your waist. Once it gets there, you start sliding in more easily as your body does not get any thicker anymore. Lawrence grabs your bound hands and puts them into the manager. He then continues to push you down and you eventually get to your chest. You watch your rib bones to see how far you are, and you see rib after rib sink into complete absorption. Lawrence started to struggle a little bit because of the gain in body width nearing the shoulders, but he eventually gets you in until her hole is wrapped around your shoulders. The manager says something for the first time in a while. "Lawrence, why don't we make this a little more fun. Push her in just a little further, but stop when my muscles start sliding her in on their own." Lawrence obliges and pushes you in just a little further. The manager takes her first action at pushing you in, and she clenches her hole so tight that your shoulders bend. You feel something deep inside of her shift, and her hole slips you in very quickly until her pucker wraps around your neck. The manager says "No more pushing. I want gravity and suction to take the rest of her. I want her to watch her worthless life slowly disappear before her, as I take her further." Lawrene takes his hands off of you. You feel yourself sinking further, and the manager sucks her stomach inward to create suction. You start sliding in even quicker. You get up to your ears and the manager says "Get her to face up. I want the last thing she sees to be a small star of light that is her freedom slowly shrinking as she vanishes." He does this by reaching in and pulling your chin out. As he does this, you hear and feel a strong suction form, and you are forced to face upward. As the manager's ass nears your face, she says one final thing to you. It is very simple, she says "goodbye forever". She then reaches down towards your face, but to your surprise she does not use her hand to finish you off. She instead just waves goodbye at you. You feel a pocket of gas travel up toward her pucker. It bulges without letting you go. The fart escapes and her hole tightens again, pushing you fully in. You do actually watch the star of light shrink and disappear. You are still conscious for a few minutes to feel her stand up and walk, you assume she puts her clothes back on. She says to everyone, "If anyone says a word about this, you will be my next meal." You slip away, slowly suffocating.

The police filed a missing person's file, but nobody told anyone anything so the case went cold and everyone pretty much got away with murder.

-The end. I hope this entertains all who read it : )
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Re: Detailed anal vore

Postby Straxacore » Fri Nov 26, 2021 3:33 am

Very nice stories. You are very good.
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Re: Detailed anal vore

Postby TimeToRun » Sat Nov 27, 2021 12:54 pm

Hey, these are some good short stories you made there. Why don't you make a gallery so you can post these stories? It would be easier in the future if people want to read those stories back. Anyways great stuff :)
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Broken laws (Anal vore)

Postby AVF » Sun Nov 28, 2021 4:14 pm

You are a young criminal named Jeffrey Ardon, and you have committed several crimes like auto theft, robbery, and kidnapping. After several court sessions, the judge has ruled that you go to prison for 15 years. The prison you will be sent to is called the Arawa prison, and there is something special about it. The prisoners there may do whatever they please to other prisoners as long as it does not hurt or interfere with the guards. The thing that happens most in this prison is rape, but murder is not unheard of. None of these things add prison time to the prisoners who do it. Well you got sent there and you are being pulled out of the prison van that you were riding in for hours. You are met with heavy gates with an electricity symbol on them. You notice the gnarly barbed wire atop this fence, then you look forward again to see two guards holding what looks like assault riffles. The guards who were escorting you push you onto your face on the ground, and the other guards grab you and drag you into the prison. You watch the doors close, and see what would be the last taste of freedom you would have. You go through a second set of doors where you and the guards have their ID taken, and you get a picture taken of you. You get given a heavy orange jumpsuit and get told to put it on. You do, stripping down to your boxers and then putting the suit on. You notice that the suit is very heavy and tight-skinned and the guards take your clothes away. They cuff you and take you through a third set of doors which needs a key card to activate, and once you are through the guards take your cuffs off and leave. You are greeted by a large lunchroom where dozens of prisoners are eating. You sit down and eat, and then two more guards come and escort you to a room with a tattoo gun on the table. You are sat down on a chair, and they tattoo your cell number and name on your arm. Your cell is #907 or the 7th cell on the 9th floor. The guards escort you and all the other prisoners to their cells. You are lucky, your cell has a small window about the size of your hand on it. This window is just enough to make it very cold in your cell and let moonlight through. You notice something strange with the beds. The blanket is a weighted one, and has a spot where the edges tuck into. You climb in your bed, tuck your blanket in and realize that it locks in place. Well, stuck there for the night, you try to sleep without much success. You eventually do fall asleep, and get jolted awake by your bed unlocking and vibrating. You get up and go to the lunchroom for breakfast and notice that some big tough guys are staring you down. You become intimidated, and attempt to leave the lunchroom. One of them follow you and grabs you, turning you around and punching you so hard you get knocked out. You wake up to a warm and tight pressure around your waist. You look down to your legs, but instead see a smooth, round and white ass. You realize that they are pushing you not out of their butt, like you thought they might be, but in. While you think about it, they have gotten you into them up to your chest. You see that you are right side up, so that the person has gravity helping them out. You are in the middle of the lunchroom and see lots of prisoners standing around. They are not trying to help you get out though, but they are cheering the person below you on. You look down, but your chin presses into something soft. You are in the person up to your head, and the person consuming you cannot reach you anymore. You breath a sigh of relief, thinking that you can't go any further. Someone from the crowd of prisoners comes near you, and the person who is engulfing you lays down. The new person unzips his suit to reveal a hard, white, giant cock. You expect him to push you further in with his hand, but he presses his dick against your head. You feel yourself sliding in further, and the person that you are in groans with pleasure. The other person who is pushing you stops when you are gone until your eyes, but your consumer orgasms, which forces you to disappear. The last thing you hear is the crowd cheering again, and you feel the person who took you into them stand up. You feel someone pushing against his ass again, and then see a fist. This fist pushes you deeper, until you go around a sort of corner and feel yourself sliding on your own again. The person takes their hand out, but you keep sliding deeper and deeper, ensuring that you have vanished forever.

-The end : )
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Round Girl (Anal Vore)(Willng)

Postby AVF » Thu Dec 02, 2021 12:19 am

You are a young adult male named Tyley Jones. You have a special school just like high school, but it is for a sex Ed program. It has the same hours, free lunch, all that kind of thing, but there is also coffee for which you are forever grateful. They teach things like male and female anatomy in the genital area, and special attention is focused on breasts for breast cancer. Not surprisingly, more males participate than females. Well one day you wake up early as usual, you comb your hair, you get on your usual (but nice looking) clothing and cologne. You head off to school, eat breakfast and notice a huge round and extremely thiccc girl at the breakfast table. She is so thick that when she sits down, her ass squishes to form pretty much around the chair. She is also very jiggly, like those satisfying cakes that you see videos of cutting sometimes. She wobbles more than usual, but despise your fascination, you focus back on your breakfast. You notice that you have a throbbing hard dick, and it is bigger than you have ever seen before. You eat your breakfast and it slowly relaxes. You head to your class, and to your surprise, that same girl is standing at the front of the class. Her skintight suit stretches and strains to keep her butt cheeks contained. The bell rings, and the class fills with your classmates and friends. The teacher begins a presentation when everyone is seated. He says "Today, we will focus on something quite unusual. Our topic will be Anal vore, which we will actually demonstrate today with our fine guest, Angelina Chaman." Angelina waves to the classroom and naturally, all of the men wave back. A few women do too, but you see that Angeline focuses on yours more. The teacher says "Well, getting into it, I will explain anal vore and what we will do today. Anal vore is a sex activity where there has to be two participants. One would be the predator, and the other the prey. The prey would crawl into, or be inserted into the predators anus. This usually results in the prey disappearing forever, as the colon has a natural suction to it that once the prey is fully in, keeps sucking them further until they asphyxiate. This makes it impossible for anal vore to be a safe activity for the prey, but a really enjoyable death. For the predator, the choice is theirs whether or not the prey has to disappear, and has a really good time absorbing their prey either way. There are different types of anal vore, one is unwilling, where the prey fights to stay out but the pred overpowers them. In this instance, the prey almost always vanishes forever because the pred gets carried away in ultimate power. The other is willing, which we will practice today, where the prey helps the pred push them in, and even stimulates the preds asshole by applying pressures in the right spots. There is a chance that the prey may be released during this, but it is unlikely as the shoulders are a point of no return. Once a prey is in until the preds hole is around their neck, that suction I mentioned earlier usually keeps the prey moving in. This sometimes causes the prey to struggle, which only stimulates the pred and pulls them deeper faster. At this point, the pred is nearing an orgasm, which, if the vore has played out as I have said, always sucks the prey in whether they want to or not. The pred cannot even stop it. In our practices today, someone must unfortunately give themselves up, because we will be particularly focused on the last part where nobody has to push the prey, and the rest of us will watch the prey sink until they vanish and practice an orgasm ourselves as it will be quite entertaining. We have our lube, which will ensure that our pred does not get hurt or even uncomfortable, and the prey must strip their clothes off to make it even easier. The prey must be fully compliant, as we will be using the willing method and the pred has asked that the prey try to move around to stimulate her, and she also wants the prey to sit still when they are into her until their neck, and let themselves sink slowly. Well, class, do we have any volunteers?" Before the teacher can say anything else, you have your hand up. Angelina gets excited, she has been eyeballing you all day. The teacher says "Well, I guess Tyley will be our prey. Don't worry, guys, you can all volunteer another day if you choose to, but Tyler will give himself to dissappear in front of the class today." The class gives a round of applause for your bravery. The teacher strips off your clothing and grabs the lube. He seemingly strategically places lube to cover your entire body, but it is especially caked on in the parts of you where your body widens. Angelina takes her pants off, which jiggles her whole ass. She spreads her cheeks, which you notice are completely hairless. The teacher piles lube up in her crack, and he places a step ladder for you to get your feet in, because she and you are pretty tall. You step on her ass cheeks and feel for the first time just how soft she is. You cannot see your feet, though you have not put them in her hole yet and that is only her squishing and forming around you just like she did with her chair earlier. You crouch low and put your hands on her ass, sliding your feet towards her hole. They almost immediately enter, though she wasn't gaping before. Again, that is just how soft she is. Gravity takes itself part, and pushes you town until you are in until your knees. You move your legs around, as she had requested and you feel her tense up and feel her moan in pleasure. Her ass acts just like quicksand, where the more you move the faster it absorbs you. You move until you are up to your waste, and Angelina says something. "Can anyone from the class push Tyley until his shoulders?" Your friend volunteers and comes to the front. The teacher covers his hands in lube. He has to reach down quite a bit, but grabs your shoulders and begins pushing. You say "sup, bro" and he says back "sup". He keeps pushing, and you keep moving to make the job easier. He gets you to your shoulders and takes his hands off. Angelina let's gravity pull your shoulders in, and in a matter of seconds, her hole wraps around your neck. You sit still, though you know that there is no way out anymore. You face the classroom as you sink further and further, and you see her cheeks rise further and further above you. You eventually cannot see anymore. The class watched you sink until your chin was out of sight, then your nose, then your eyes, then your forehead and hair. They all did their orgasms, and you hear the teacher do it too. Angelina does it too, forcing her to clench out of pleasure, and forcing you to disappear forever.

And there was the last of Tyley Jones that the world would ever see again. You slowly suffocate, but before you die, you cum, which propels you deeper and deeper, and you suffocate while you experience the most intense orgasm you have ever felt before.

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