First story in a while - Syndra Faralei: Strange New Banquet

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First story in a while - Syndra Faralei: Strange New Banquet

Postby Jacquelope » Mon May 15, 2023 1:10 am

https://aryion.com/g4/view/892667

Looking for some critique... beat it up if you have to!
Experiment: Will a grenade kill a giant naga by exploding in its belly?
Test #1: Inconclusive. Grenade exploded in naga''s mouth.
Test #2: Inconclusive. Grenade exploded in naga's throat.
Further tests delayed until another live specimen can be acquired.
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Re: First story in a while - Syndra Faralei: Strange New Ban

Postby Jacquelope » Sun Jun 25, 2023 10:20 pm

And another one:

Saphielle’s Weight Control Plan

https://aryion.com/g4/view/905914
Experiment: Will a grenade kill a giant naga by exploding in its belly?
Test #1: Inconclusive. Grenade exploded in naga''s mouth.
Test #2: Inconclusive. Grenade exploded in naga's throat.
Further tests delayed until another live specimen can be acquired.
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