My attempts at cooking vore drawings

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My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby Unknowingly123 » Mon Feb 05, 2024 6:08 am

Hello,
recently I decided to try my hand at drawing. In my opinion my attempts are pretty bad, but I am trying to improve.
So if anyone can give me some criticism I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby TheWildeWood » Mon Feb 05, 2024 11:15 pm

That's a good start. I can tell what everything is and the proportions aren't all over the place. Keep at it.

For constructive criticism, I'd focus on the heat sources.
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby ArletSnow » Wed Feb 07, 2024 11:37 pm

I also usually draw characters on food, I would recommend looking for photos of that dishes from various angles (it is not necessary that the dishes are the same, just that they look alike) that will give you a better vision of how they look and more ideas about what details to place in them. your illustrations, personally I think the cutest one is the pokemon one <3 would you let me draw a version of that? ^^
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby LordStorm » Thu Feb 08, 2024 2:46 am

Not bad, reminds me a lot of my really early stuff :) Best art advice I can give is to just keep at it. It will improve often without you even realizing it :silly:
Plus more cooking themed artists are always a welcome sight :-D
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby Drawstuff » Thu Feb 08, 2024 12:53 pm

They're good for where you're at and I do like your use of color but it is very important that you get a handle on the fundamentals (anatomy, perspective, form/structure, light/shadow, color, and composition). Once you know the rules, then you can start breaking them.

Practice and try to sketch common things like people, places, animals or household items. This will help build your hand/eye coordination and build your visual library.

Also look at the methods used by more experienced artists, real and digital. There are plenty of youtube tutorials for those things. THAT is how you will improve.
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby Unknowingly123 » Mon Feb 12, 2024 7:57 am

Thank you all for the advice. I really appreciate it
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Re: My attempts at cooking vore drawings

Postby Unknowingly123 » Mon Feb 12, 2024 7:59 am

ArletSnow wrote:I also usually draw characters on food, I would recommend looking for photos of that dishes from various angles (it is not necessary that the dishes are the same, just that they look alike) that will give you a better vision of how they look and more ideas about what details to place in them. your illustrations, personally I think the cutest one is the pokemon one <3 would you let me draw a version of that? ^^


Of course you can. It´s not like I own anything in the picture.
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