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Looking for feedback on a 3 part cock vore series I wrote :D

Postby SlickSlickers » Mon May 05, 2025 8:52 am

Hello everyone !
I am new to writing vore pieces so I wanted to get some feedback on my first writing project. Any critique is welcome and you can leave it on the stories itself, the thread here I think? (idk how forums work), or a pm is fine to.
Thanks in advance. :D


Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1122792
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1124555
Part 3: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1130258
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