Girl Scout (m/f)

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Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby fatbelly19 » Tue May 23, 2017 1:42 am

Here's a random quick M/F human vore story I wrote a while back. It's not the best quality since I literally just wrote as I went along with no planning, but I'd be interested to see what you guys think. Thanks
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Re: Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby Houyo » Tue May 23, 2017 4:35 am

Was a fun little read. Skimpy on details, but a good scenario.
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Re: Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby coop500 » Tue May 23, 2017 8:24 am

Is this a fatal story?
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Re: Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby chechico » Tue May 23, 2017 11:56 pm

coop500 wrote:Is this a fatal story?


Girl is 18 and is Fatal.

Now on the story. It was a nice short story and wih some work you could make it a pretty good one. Work a bit more on the buildup and swalowing as it seemed to go end in a blink.

Hope o see more from you
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Re: Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby Darkk » Fri May 26, 2017 9:00 am

Nice^^
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Re: Girl Scout (m/f)

Postby Krowley » Fri May 26, 2017 10:55 am

I love the concept. All I can really tell you is to keep at it and try to spend a bit more time editing - or find another set of eyes to look over the story for you, since it makes the presentation a lot more appealing.
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