This shit is disgusting

[RikuHidanza]

I to would like to see some first person ub or head first pov as some might call it.

[zelphi]

yep yep i think pardox has some thing like it

[ublover1]

Id also like to see this there isnt very many 1st person ub shots

[voreftw]

Link to paradox's gallery
http://aryion.com/g4/view/206124

[ublover1]

more?

Yeah i want mawrrrrr!!!!! Also lol

[Crimson]

Off memory didn't HFG do a UB video with her endoscope? Cant seem to find it around, but it should be somewhere

[ian66613]

More first-person is definitely needed, especially without switching to third-person

[Elpie]

ive got a pretty detailed unbirth POV in this chapter of my fanfic

http://aryion.com/g4/view/195372

[ian66613]

ive got a pretty detailed unbirth POV in this chapter of my fanfic

http://aryion.com/g4/view/195372

"First-person pov" in writing is actually second-person (where the narration addresses the reader with "You")

However, writing DOES have something called first-person, where the narrator is one of the characters, telling the story. (Using me and I instead.)

Third-person is the same as it is in pictures, however.

When writing fictional stories, it is bad practice to use more than one point of view in the same paragraph however, or within even the same chapter. The only exception is if the first-person narrator dies in the story, in which, it usually changes to first-person narration of another character, with an explanation at the start of the next chapter, with the death of the previous narrator being the end of the last chapter. (Or switch to third-person instead.)

[Elpie]

ehh *shrugs* i must've gotten the POV terminology mixed up, then it DOES, however, go into decent detail about the actual unbirth, as opposed to the subject being outside the womb one moment and inside the next

[four_fleets]

!!!UNDERAGE WARNING!!!

http://aryion.com/g4/view/172117 (1)
http://aryion.com/g4/view/172118 (2)
http://aryion.com/g4/view/172119 (3)
http://aryion.com/g4/view/172120 (4)



Its a series by At_tltb

[Paradox]

>< i actually respond pretty late to this thread. Glad that people like my work with the 1st Person UB - Thanks :3 (even though i often think the quality could be better).

-> I Recently remembered something:
Years ago i did read an UB-story that was in (i believe) first Person.
It was about a man massaging his wives back while they were watching TV and eventually he started massaging her rear and started entering her.
I believe the title was "Grooming" though i am not sure if it really was 1st Person and if this was the title.
Am pretty sure it was in the old UB-groups of yahoo before they were all raided by yahoo's anti fetish groups raidings. (Meaning almost 6-8 years) Does anyone remember a story like that?

[Groblek]

Paradox - I think the story you're talking about is here: viewtopic.php?f=55&t=13009&hilit=Dream+weevil&start=60 I'd saved it from the Yahoo group - it was one of Dream Weevil's, and I posted it in his thread as " a little unbirth fantasy" - about halfway down the page.

[Paradox]

Paradox - I think the story you're talking about is here: viewtopic.php?f=55&t=13009&hilit=Dream+weevil&start=60 I'd saved it from the Yahoo group - it was one of Dream Weevil's, and I posted it in his thread as " a little unbirth fantasy" - about halfway down the page.

Yeah! that's is Thx very much^^

[ublover1]

Thats a hot story:)