My First UB Drawing ^_^

[shadownaga]

Hay ya people!
I have stopped writing vore stories on my PC to try my hand at drawing something last night, I have drawn my alias Ruby (aka. Shadow Naga, aka. me ...as a Naga) unbirthing her lover Will (Made up charter that's her/my lover in her/mine stories, yeah I know I'm just confusing the matter hehe) and both of them are loving it

...anyway I'm talking too much, have a look and tell me what you think about it ^_^

Ruby x

[momonari]

Well ... You're actually pretty good at this ... I like it in overall, as any good voraphile, but it wont drive me to a climax either ... Here's a few pointers so you can make any voraphile pee his pants with your remarkable art: just a joke, they won't actually pee their pants uless they suffer from urinary incontinence

1 Use White, not college ruled paper??

2 Her breasts sizes are too different, usually one breast IS bigger than the other ... But that's too much, it should be almost undetectably bigger... try to make them the same... they'll end up a bit different anyway

3 Where's her nose?

4 Ok: This one is a men magnet: Women hips (even if she's a naga) should ALWAYS be wider in a than her Breasts and Shoulders even if just a little (men do have wider shoulders than hips)

5 Hands!!! There's nothing I can do for you here ... Practice ... Practice and practice more, once you can draw hands well, you're pretty much a full fledged artist

6 Mouth !! Don't take the effort to draw the uvula, almost always ends up looking bad, you did well here but I bet it was hard, try drawing some teeth instead: easier and look better

7 RIBS !!! I know it's annoying but in a slim girl you'll always see her lower ribs where her torax becomes abdomen

8 the lines on her sides where her torax becomes abdomen need a little more curving

9 Finally: The semen... Is that Guy Eyaculating HAIR??? ... It should look more liquid... and less Spiky

I like the pic !!! you clearly sketched before actually drawing and then used pen for the finish !! That's Awesome !!! those are just some tips that could make your pic climb from good to Incredible !! Use them if you want, Good Luck !! and Keep it up !! u r doing great !

[ublover1]

Damn thats awsome shadow naga:)

[shadownaga]

Damn thats awsome shadow naga:)

Thanks UB, I mostly don't draw but hay it's a one off

...Don't like how my boobs turned out, ones bigger than the other ¬_¬

[shadownaga]

Well ... You're actually pretty good at this ... I like it in overall, as any good voraphile, but it wont drive me to a climax either ... Here's a few pointers so you can make any voraphile pee his pants with your remarkable art: just a joke, they won't actually pee their pants uless they suffer from urinary incontinence

1 Use White, not college ruled paper??

2 Her breasts sizes are too different, usually one breast IS bigger than the other ... But that's too much, it should be almost undetectably bigger... try to make them the same... they'll end up a bit different anyway

3 Where's her nose?

4 Ok: This one is a men magnet: Women hips (even if she's a naga) should ALWAYS be wider in a than her Breasts and Shoulders even if just a little (men do have wider shoulders than hips)

5 Hands!!! There's nothing I can do for you here ... Practice ... Practice and practice more, once you can draw hands well, you're pretty much a full fledged artist

6 Mouth !! Don't take the effort to draw the uvula, almost always ends up looking bad, you did well here but I bet it was hard, try drawing some teeth instead: easier and look better

7 RIBS !!! I know it's annoying but in a slim girl you'll always see her lower ribs where her torax becomes abdomen

8 the lines on her sides where her torax becomes abdomen need a little more curving

9 Finally: The semen... Is that Guy Eyaculating HAIR??? ... It should look more liquid... and less Spiky

I like the pic !!! you clearly sketched before actually drawing and then used pen for the finish !! That's Awesome !!! those are just some tips that could make your pic climb from good to Incredible !! Use them if you want, Good Luck !! and Keep it up !! u r doing great !

Thanks Momonari! This was just a little doodle that became a bit more, I'm more of a writer as my drawing usually sucks, when I next draw (If I next draw) I will take on your advice. But for now its back to Mircosoft word and my tails of vore hehe