Hello everyone, I think anyone may remember UnbirthFetalKick's story Diane's Second Chance which I simply saw that story being the closest story we're going to get for a Groblek style consensual Unbirth story involving AR.
Basically what I'm aiming for is not only a feet first unbirthing scene (which I've already done which is my best attempt at it which really isn't the best but this is all from Groblek's help of course) but also extended scenes of her inside the womb during the March and April months with a few "Doctor's Surprise" style erotic moments inside the womb with the relaxing environment and hormone rush causing her to feel horny and such.
If anyone here is willing to help me write or 'complete' this story since I don't think I'll be able to do this myself.
BTW here's the story itself that I modified since it's now feet first insertion and deleted any reference to head shaving and my best attempt at medical style writing during insertion.
Any advice or help improving the insertion scene (making it medical and erotic at the same time) and especially scenes inside the womb?
UnbirthFetalKick's "Diane Second Chance" modified story
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UnbirthFetalKick's "Diane Second Chance" modified story
by Jannak » Sat Jan 13, 2018 8:07 pm
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