Forgettable Boy Translation (FINISHED!!!)

[gorgonzoladealer]

So I've been working on this for a while. If you've been on pixiv and look up UB, you probably know who TEN is. And if you follow TEN, chances are you've seen his work titled 忘れられた少年. It has so many parts, but its all in Japanese. Plus the creator doesn't understand a lick of English. So I've decided to translate all of it. I'm not done, but I would like some input on how accurate or weird you think it reads out.

Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lDK ... u2aoq7h2nI

5-22-2018: Just finished the Witching Hour Arc! Now there's the Maid Recess Arc coming soon. I work slow so if you wanted to watch me work, then its gonna be pretty boring.

5-27-2018: Got the Maid Recess Arc finished. Was a little rough due to the grammar but I managed.

6-1-2018: Divine Intervention is now ready and made for reading. The final arc is coming soon and its a big one so be prepared for that. Again, feedback would be great.

6-9-2018: The whole series is done!!! For the moment... there are alternate routes you can go to to continue the story, but I won't translate those for a while. Thank you guys for all of your support through this. Make sure to do the poll as it will affect future translations. Also, discuss your favorite moments.

[Achenar]

It all looks pretty solid from here so far! Great effort.

[gorgonzoladealer]

Thanks. Didn't think I'd get a response.

[Snivylicious]

上手よ！
You did a really good job!
I used to translate vore comics under the moniker marunomi on Tumblr, but stopped a while ago. I'm glad to see more people working on stuff like this! Keep it up!

[Jacquelope]

That character in the girl's suit is a boy?

[gorgonzoladealer]

I guess so. He does have a penis and he the series has shonen in the name soooo....

[gorgonzoladealer]

And thank you Snivylicious!

[right2fail]

You are a hero!

[gorgonzoladealer]

I don't exactly know how the forum works but I just finished the Witching Hour Arc. Next one's the Maid Recess.

[gorgonzoladealer]

Ayyy, updated again. x3

[gorgonzoladealer]

The second to last arc is finished. I hope you're excited!! All... one of you at least.

[vortrum]

I just discovered this thread and, oh my goddess! It's pure gold!
So many thanks for translate Ten's work, you're the best!!

[gorgonzoladealer]

Thanks vortrum

[Shadowlyger]

I like how about halfway through the kid's just like, "Oh great, I'm in another vagina, boy what a surprise that is. "

[fireguy2270]

The translation makes it like 10X better. Thanks a million for your work!

[gorgonzoladealer]

@fireguy2270 Thank you X>

@Shadowlyger It's not surprising. This is just his life now.

[gorgonzoladealer]

Be sure to do the poll boys.

[Someone92]

You should start a new line for the English translation. It becomes tiresome to look for the beginning of the translation in the middle of a line.