No need for jealousy (F/F softvore F/M UB)

[observer13426]

Serena rolled around her bed, holding her pillows to her ears to drown out the noise from her roommate's room. Heather and Steve were at it yet again, and the flat's walls weren't exactly soundproof as she'd like. She didn't hold it against her friend to have a loving, sexual relationship, but there were times Serena couldn't help but be jealous.

Heather was the petite one, perky breasts, short curly hair and a 'tight little touche' as Steve liked to put it. It was hardly surprising that she could woo any guy she wanted, not that she was some kind of man trap of a woman, she was a nicer person than that. In looks, Serena on the other hand was much larger, not just that she was tall as most guys, but she was also very curvy, her body a plethora of round flesh.

Soon it was just too much for her to bear, listening to the two of themselves enjoy each other's company and for her not to be included. She decided what she was going to do. Getting out of bed, she took off her night clothes, her flesh exposed until she picked up a thin night gown that barely closed around herself. Gingerely, she stepped out into the hallway towards Heather's room, the door slightly ajar. Inside, she could still hear the moans of sexual pleasure.

She peeked around the door as quietly as she could, and beheld her roomate still riding Steve in bed, slowly gliding up and down. Serena bit her lip gently seeing Heather naked like that, though she would see more than just her back in a moment. Pushing through the door's threshold, she stepped lightly through. There wasn't many steps till she was alongside the two. It was only then that the pair of them noticed Serena.

"What are you doing?!" Heather exclaimed in shock, her arms locking around her naked breasts in modesty. Steve merely looked up perplexed, still slightly out of it from the pleasure that Heather's administrations gave him.

Serena tried not to, but she began to breathe heavily seeing the two beneath her. Without warning, and with agility in contrast to her bulk, she lept onto the bed, straddling Steve's face and burying it with the crevasse between her ass cheeks. His muffled groans of shock echoed in her rump, sending the first ripples of pleasure through Serena's body. Serena's eyes closed while she enjoyed his sudden struggles.

Heather could only look in disbelief as her boyfriend's upper torso dissappeared under her roommate's bulk. Her mouth hung open as Serena's hands pulled the nightgown open, revealing the rest of her immense flesh, breasts standing out proudly in the open.

"Se..Serena?" she asked, "Wha...what?" Shaking her head, she carried on stammering "Look, I know you're feeling...lonely, but you can't just take Steve for yourself."
As a smile slowly crossed her face, Serena's eyes finally opened and locked with the shocked gaze of her small friend.

"Take him for myself?" she asked with almost a playful tone, "But I'm not planning on just having him."

Again with sudden speed, her arms shot out, her hands reaching for Heather greedily. Heather found herself squeezed into the breasts and belly of Serena, folds of flesh beginning to surround her own naked body as Serena pulled her deep into herself. With gentleness that contrasted again heavily with what already happened, Serena started kissing Heather, her lips wrapping around the smaller woman's mouth.

Heather began to feel dizzy. Was it with delight at the all embracing caress of her friend? Shock and confusion that this same friend was essentially taking her and Stever against their will to pleasure herself? She honestly couldn't tell, but for some reason couldn't stop Serena.

Serena groaned happily as she began to kiss Heather harder, her tongue pushing her lips apart. Not to leave Steve feeling left out, she began to ground her pussy over his face, her groin beginning to tingle with the heat of his panicked breath. She could feel his arms trying to squirm under her thighs, but it was no good. However, her smaller roommate was the target of Serena's passions now.

Slowly, her lips parted further, Heather's face being covered more and more by Serena's increasing maw. One of her hands slide it's way down Heather's back, tracing a finger between her legs and gently pushing into Heather's vulva. A small squeak echoed inside Serena's mouth from Heather in response. The lone finger probed and gyrated inside her, shooting spasms of pleasure through the smaller woman, shuddering in Serena's grip.

Serena's tongue slathered over Heather's face, saliva coating it as it was drawn further into the larger woman's mouth. Only now did Heather began to get an inkling of what her roommate had planned and tried to wriggle in resistance. This was only met a sudden crushing around her body as Serena squeezed her between her arms in a vice like grip, driving the breathe out of her lungs. For a moment, the grip loosened then started again before resuming, a pattern Serena repeated over and over, each squeeze pushing Heather further into her mouth until her head was totally engulfed.

Hands gripped tightly around the petite waists of her victim, Serena hoisted Heather above her, legs dangling up in the air. Guiding her slowly down, Serena began to gulp her weakly resisting roommate, letting her tongue carress Heather's flesh, paying particular attention to her breasts as they popped through the tight ring of her lips. Once Heather's hips were inside her mouth, Serena held her there, taking the time for her tongue to slide into her vulva, tasting the mixed juices of both Steve and Heather. The little woman squirmed again in involuntary pleasure as her nethers were probed, writhing inside Serena's oesophagus. Feeling her roommate move inside her made Serena groan in pleasure, her tongue pushing further and lashing harder until Heather exploded in orgasmic pleasure, her juices flooding Serena's mouth.
Savouring the taste for a few moments, Serena gulped down the cum, feeling it coat Heather. Once that was down, she grabbed a hold of the legs still limply flailing and pushed them the rest of the way down, her tongue giving a playful tickle to Heather's feet before they disappeared down her gullet.

Now completely inside her new fleshy prison, Heather was forced by abdominal muscles into a ball, flesh slick with cum, sweat and saliva. She could barely move, struggling with only token effort, beginning to sob at the total insanity of what was going on.

Again groaning with pleasure, Serena looked down at her newly extended belly and stroked it with satisfaction. After a few moments, she straightened with a shock.

"Oh, I almost forgot!" she exclaimed to herself, raising herself up, exposing Steve to outside world from under her bulk. As she twisted around to look, she was almost surprised to see him move, if only to weakly gasp for air he had been denied for so long.

Tracing her tongue around her lips, she slowly and deliberately started to turn herself around, looking down at him as she lowered herself onto his miracuously still erect penis. Steve looked up in delirious confusion as Serena's belly rolled across his torso, stopping just short of his chin. The smiling monster of a woman on top of him giggled as she caressed her belly in front of him, which still moved and jiggled as Heather still struggled inside.

Leaning forward, pushing more weight into Steve, Serena looked hungrily into his eyes.
"Sorry about leaving you under there so long, I just got carried away there. In case you didn't guess what's happened, I have Heather in here..."
She gave a squeeze of her belly to emphasise her statement.

"She tasted oh so wonderful. I suppose you'll be wanting to see her again though?"

He nodded.

She smiled evilly "There's a good boyfriend. She knows how to pick them. Well, if you want to see her, you have to give your body for me to fuck. And trust me, I will fuck you till you're seeing stars."

Leaning back, she looked thoughtfully at her belly.

"If you don't...I might just have to digest our dear Heather. So what do you say?"

There was muffled shouts from inside Serena, but Steve couldn't make them out. He barely thought for a moment. What else could he do? He nodded weakly. Serena grinned triumphantly.

"Excellent!"

No sooner had she said that, Steve felt the first pounding of his pelvis as Serena began to rode him, raising and dropping her full weight onto him, the air being forced out of him, the feeling in his legs going as the blood in his body was forced around in all sorts of ways. She had begun slowly, to make each thrust down onto him fully felt, but she began to pick up the pace, the loud slap of flesh against flesh ringing around the room.

"I'm not feeling any effort from you, Steve! You gotta work with me!" she crooned forcefully. Steve looked at her flabberghasted.

"And do what?" was all he managed.

"Anything, babe. Caress my beautiful flesh, kiss it, anything!"

With great effort, he managed to get his hands from underneath Serena and began to rub her belly, lightly digging into her flesh. She grabbed his hands and pinned them onto her breasts, the flesh surrounding them within seconds. That seemed to do the trick as Serena now began to just grind him instead, moaning gently. It felt wierd to Steve to fell so much flesh move over him, not just Serena, but he could feel Heather still weakly struggling inside her belly on top of him.

The sensation grew from wierd to slightly enjoyable, and from there went to extreme arousal. He couldn't understand how he could be turned on by this, but he was. Soon he found himself trying to thrust up into his seeming new master. As she realised what was happening in between her legs, Serena gave Steve a wink, before grinding even harder, pressing him deeper into her, and closer to completion.

And like that he was done, shooting a stream of his cum inside her, his body contorting as he ejaculated in such constriction. Within a few moments, he was spent, going limp in Serena's folds of flesh.

"That's was very good, sweety," Serena looked down at his panting face, red from exertion and lack of breathe, "...but we're not quite done yet."

Steve snapped out of his reviere to see her raise her bulk once again, his slick penis sliding from her flesh. Soon she stood above him, feet planted on either side of his waist, her form towering over his battered body.

"I've yet to come from either of you yet, though I guess I can't blame you," she explained calmly, "so what I'm going to need you to do is go down on me."
She parted her flesh to display her vulva to Steve, glistening with bodily fluids and beckoned him with a single finger. By this point, Steve wasn't able to form a single thought and followed the instruction. As he got to his knees and began to bring his face towards the fleshy orifice, he found his head shoved forward into his new fleshy prison as Serena planted her hand on the back of his head.

Now buried between her thighs, he could do the only thing he could and began to lick inside Serena. The blood pounded in his head from the pressure of her crotch, thighs and belly crushing his head from all sides, but he didn't stop. His tongue probed further and caressed as best he was able at her sensitive flesh. Each movement he made was replied with either a spasm or tightening of his prison, Serena moaning louder and louder as he continued.

Mercifully, it didn't take him too long to bring her to climax, her juices nearly drowning him. It was a good thing Serena still had him by his hair to pull him out, Steve didn't have the strength left in him. She peered over her belly at her little man slave with content.

"Right, I did say I would let Heather go if you did as I asked, and you did a wonderful effort, so I should hold up my end up of the bargain."

Bringing Heather back up was much more a quicker affair, as Serena found it difficult to keep Heather in place mid-bringing up. Within moments, Heather was slumped on her side on the bed pillows, shaking at her ordeal, eyes barely meeting Serena's. Steve was still beneath the amazon of a woman.

"I'll have to be honest with you two," Serena began innocently, "I may of enjoyed that way too much."

The couple couldn't think of a reply to that, and so Serena continued.

"So much, I want to do it again soon. Thing is I can't risk my little crotch diver," she jiggled Steve's head around a little "going away from me, so I'm going to keep him somewhere safe."

And with that, she pushed him back into her crotch. This time, his head seem to completely disappear into her. As she bent her knees, Serena's vulva began to take more of Steve in, first stretching incredibly to take in his shoulders before he seemed to torpedo into her body as she put his full weight down on him. With a wet slop, he was into her down to his knees.

Heather could only watch in horror as Steve was helped along the rest of the way by Serena's greedy grasping hands, the vulva somehow shrinking back to it's original size now that her boyfriend was now completely trapped in her roommate's uterus. Again, Serena's body bulged with the added person, the skin warping under his weakened movements.

It was too much for Heather to handle, she had to get out. Without thinking, she tried to scramble out of bed, but didn't get far as she has picked up and again in Serena's all encompassing embrace. The large woman somehow looked hurt.
"Where are you going? Shouldn't we cuddle first after such an intimate event?" she asked, before kissing Heather with the surprisingly gentle touch of her lips. There was no resistance this time around as Serena's tongue pushed into her mouth, the tongues now mutually twisting around each other. The larger woman experimentally pulled away and brought Heather down to one of her breasts, almost surprised to find that she now voluntairly began to suck on Serena's nipple. Their arms now began to gently caress each other, fingers gently digging into each other.

Soon, Heather lay down on her back, allowing Serena to lay down on top of her, darkness enveloping her as Serena's ample cleavage engulfed her head, just enough of a gap to let the smaller woman breathe a little, even as the full weight of Serena and Steve weighed down on her.

By this point, Steve was now unconcious from the exhaustion of the night, not sure if he was going to see the next morning. Heather squirmed in tighter to the body that had her completely pinned inside itself, getting more comfy. Serena smiled contently, feeling the two bodies that were now hers to enjoy with satisfaction.
See, she thought to herself, why be jealous of one, when I can have both?

[Indighost]

Very erotic story. I would have liked to know more about the characters, but the way it is, it is very sexy. In particular, great use of adjectives and adverbs. Nice job!

[vmoartet]

Awesome stuff!

[observer13426]

Very erotic story. I would have liked to know more about the characters, but the way it is, it is very sexy. In particular, great use of adjectives and adverbs. Nice job!

Thanks for your comments. To be honest, this is the first vore story I've put on general viewing, so any comments are appreciated Any suggestions as to how I should let my readers know more about the characters beforeheand without interrupting the flow of the story (I suppose established characters are easier to 'know' in that regard)? Glad to know the use of vocabulary struck a chord with my readers

[Indighost]

Any suggestions as to how I should let my readers know more about the characters beforeheand without interrupting the flow of the story (I suppose established characters are easier to 'know' in that regard)?

Sure. A few things to consider:

1. If I had to guess, I would say only about 40% of porn story readers/writers feel any need for well-developed characters. So you should feel no duty to do this. It is my preference however

2. Characters are developed by showing how they talk and do things. There are a bunch of ways you can do this in a vore/porn story while keeping the heat up. Use any combination of the following options.

Option a. Show them doing non-porn things. Ie, have a plot in your story that they take part in. In a vore story you'll usually need to set up the reason for the vore because sentient creatures eating sentient creatures is a sci-fi/fantasy concept that needs a context.
Option b. Utilize your other fetishes and have them do other types of erotic things that you enjoy. (Aside from sex and vore itself, sexy eating, a sexy cat&mouse chase or sexy spider-like seduction sequence, etc).
Option c. Add a romance or a developing friendship between the pred/prey, pred/pred enabler, or two prey characters.
Option d.Just talk a little bit about their thoughts and expressions while all the vorish events are taking place. I think you did this very well for the two prey characters in your story. I was just wondering whence all the powers of swallowing and unbirthing of the predator character came, and why it was so emotionally easy for her to do.

Option e.You CAN do fanfiction, if you really want, but I would not recommend it. The reason is simple: If you do fanfiction vore, then whether or not people understand the characters depends on whether they have seen the show. 80% of the time, you're still back at square one, people don't know the characters.

[AwesomeAustin21]

To me character development doesn't matter at all so thumbs up !!!

[Scion]

character development isn't necessary for this kind of work.

good story+, the only kind of tip I could give to improve your writing is to speak/study a writer with some serious talent,

http://expansionmansion.com/board/index ... entry55214

this author is very good, one of my favorite stories too.

[LastRider100]

WOW!! great stuff!

[rugli]

Sorry for the bump,
but this story touch all the right dials.