Voytsik wrote:So I played it. I like this concept of harem and vore. I tried to find a similar staff on this site, but there's too few of it. I found some bugs, you need to look for it better. The one I remember is a bug, when devourer eats dead girl (with 0 HP) of his party, but the girl doesn't appear in his bell/items and the player has an effect of digesting girl. I couldn't find a way to fix it. Devourer digests nothing and can't eat other girls or enemies.
Noted. Will look into and fix in the next update.
Voytsik wrote:In my opinion you should add more messages or statuses, because I don't find how long it takes to digest a girl (a few minutes or more) and what you need to do for it. I mean should I just wait the time or should I win some fights for digestion.
I've planned to add a feature where girls will talk every so often while digesting. Both to add some flavor text and to act as a gauge to show how far along they are in the digestion process. I guess it must have slipped my mind. Will add in the next update.
Voytsik wrote:I managed to eat three types of girls: bunny, loli-thunder and that fire girl. How many girls can player have in its harem? It there some limit or not? If it is you need to write it somewhere. I also wonder what happens if you win over all enemies in a location, because I noticed that they didn't resurrect until you eat some of them. I can be wrong but you need to consider the situation.
At the moment you can only have 3 girls in your harem. I plan to add a feature in the future that you can get a mansion or base to expand how many girls you can have in your harem and switch around who you have in your party. Though even then you will only be aloud to have 3 girls in your party at a time.
As for enemies coming back, I set it on a timer. At the moment it takes 30 seconds for them to resurrect. I see now that that's too long. Will shorten it in the next update.
Voytsik wrote:The battle system is a bit tricky. You need to lower enemy's hp to some level to eat a girl. But player can't see enemy's hp so it's not so easy as it states in the prologue. I have to gain my stamina to 60-80 points to eat the girl, because often two using of the skill Devour isn't enough.
Noted. I'll ad a better way to tell the enemy's HP in the future. I will also reduce the TP cost for devour.
Voytsik wrote:I suggest to implement some dialogues with your party and girls in gut. Maybe player can leave some girls in that dungeon or lead them there so they can walk freely without a player. There can be an item to manage girls and the harem itself. Some chests for items like armor and weapon that player should buy in closed shops for now. I'd like scenes with the pictures and animations of eating or sex/erotic actions. The game have now only girls pictures during the battle. You can add achievements for eating every type of girl and having it in player's harem. Or player can improve his stats after digestion a prey girl. Number of gained stats depends on the girl's level and her type. You may do that player can eat even girls without battle. For example girls in the city, where player can enter to their houses and eat preys or add them to the harem. That dungeon is enough for the begging but later player can buy a better house to live with his harem.
You need to add more interactions with the girls. To talk to them, to ask something, to do something, to join your party and so on. All the girls are always in hero's party. Can you do a thing that after entering dungeon or other players house these girls exit his party so player could talk to them? And after leaving the house girls reenter his party.
A lot of these features are ones I plan to add to the game after it get pasts the demo phase and into the game proper. The demo is mostly just meant to be a showcase for the vore combat system and the party harem system and how they work. Once I do some finishing touches on the two systems as well as figure out how to do other vital systems (like the harem base storage system) I'll go about adding these other features.
Voytsik wrote:For the plot of the game... There are so many directions in which your story can develop. You can even don't have a plot at all if you create many scenes with the girls. But these scenes must be unique so player don't get bored. There can be an adventurers guild where player can take quests for defeating enemies and gain for this some rewards like money, items, skills/spells or even new girls. I'd like to see a princess in this game or other important characters like that knight.
Aside for some world building, I haven't done anything involving making the story for the game at all. I've been too buy trying to get the core mechanics of it to work for that. That being said, I
do plan on making a story for the game. And yes, there will be many
unique girls like the lady knight in future versions. As well as quests and stuff to do. Many of them tied to the girls you eat/recruit.
Passionate advocate of female prey. As well as a passionate advocate of male preds to eat those ladies~ Though other preds are acceptable as well.