Felarya:Giant Terror is out

[demon]

Hey hey fellow Felarya brothers and sisters I bring good news.The very first Felarya game made by me is done and ready for play.


now please comment me telling me what you think.Oh yes forgot to mention this was made with the RPG maker XP so you'll need to have the run time program before you can play just google RPG Maker XP Run Time Program.And if you already have it than as a casual new yorker would say,"Forget about it".lol.now go go and play til you can't play no more



Newest version:http://www.mediafire.com/?3cq9tfdh3ii691q

[Dracon_Kitsune]

Well, I just played it through. Now my critique:

The good:
It was a full chapter, and not a demo.
Random encounters were at an ok mix of how often and how powerful.
Interesting story.

The bad:
All the vore scenes were identical. Monster says some phrase, you are put in an identical badly built belly with nothing going on. And when you leave, it just says you were digested by a giant woman. Game over.
Bad construction. It is easy to get off the path and onto blank area. Also, baddies look like normal, talk-able people, then insta-game over you.
Battles. Win/lose exactly the same. You lose, it acts like you win. You win, as soon as you talk to the person/kabold it is like the battle never happened to them.
Winnings, all you get are an unusable item.
Unrecoverable deaths. A character is defeated, you cannot revive them, and having all your chars defeated does not cause a game over.

So, it was a good~ish game, but needs some technical fixing up to do still.

[demon]

Well, I just played it through. Now my critique:

The good:
It was a full chapter, and not a demo.
Random encounters were at an ok mix of how often and how powerful.
Interesting story.

The bad:
All the vore scenes were identical. Monster says some phrase, you are put in an identical badly built belly with nothing going on. And when you leave, it just says you were digested by a giant woman. Game over.
Bad construction. It is easy to get off the path and onto blank area. Also, baddies look like normal, talk-able people, then insta-game over you.
Battles. Win/lose exactly the same. You lose, it acts like you win. You win, as soon as you talk to the person/kabold it is like the battle never happened to them.
Winnings, all you get are an unusable item.
Unrecoverable deaths. A character is defeated, you cannot revive them, and having all your chars defeated does not cause a game over.

So, it was a good~ish game, but needs some technical fixing up to do still.

Well as I accept your praise on the game I have to say it was my first game that i've ever done and The belly part was just to be as is Ireally did not want to keep making a different stomach for each girl thats why.Secondly I put my heart and soul into this game so not being a dick or anything but you have to understand that not everones perfect there first time.

[MrX]

Well, I just played it through. Now my critique:

The good:
It was a full chapter, and not a demo.
Random encounters were at an ok mix of how often and how powerful.
Interesting story.

The bad:
All the vore scenes were identical. Monster says some phrase, you are put in an identical badly built belly with nothing going on. And when you leave, it just says you were digested by a giant woman. Game over.
Bad construction. It is easy to get off the path and onto blank area. Also, baddies look like normal, talk-able people, then insta-game over you.
Battles. Win/lose exactly the same. You lose, it acts like you win. You win, as soon as you talk to the person/kabold it is like the battle never happened to them.
Winnings, all you get are an unusable item.
Unrecoverable deaths. A character is defeated, you cannot revive them, and having all your chars defeated does not cause a game over.

So, it was a good~ish game, but needs some technical fixing up to do still.

Well as I accept your praise on the game I have to say it was my first game that i've ever done and The belly part was just to be as is Ireally did not want to keep making a different stomach for each girl thats why.Secondly I put my heart and soul into this game so not being a dick or anything but you have to understand that not everones perfect there first time.

Yeah, everyones a critic, be thankful Dracon_Kitsune didn't go on an all out troll attack. I've seen that over at Giantess City. He may have a few points points though. I suggest correcting some of the issues (such as character Defeat does not cause a game over) and re-release V2 of the game. I don't have time yet to play the game, but when I do I'll let you know what I think.

[demon]

Well, I just played it through. Now my critique:

The good:
It was a full chapter, and not a demo.
Random encounters were at an ok mix of how often and how powerful.
Interesting story.

The bad:
All the vore scenes were identical. Monster says some phrase, you are put in an identical badly built belly with nothing going on. And when you leave, it just says you were digested by a giant woman. Game over.
Bad construction. It is easy to get off the path and onto blank area. Also, baddies look like normal, talk-able people, then insta-game over you.
Battles. Win/lose exactly the same. You lose, it acts like you win. You win, as soon as you talk to the person/kabold it is like the battle never happened to them.
Winnings, all you get are an unusable item.
Unrecoverable deaths. A character is defeated, you cannot revive them, and having all your chars defeated does not cause a game over.

So, it was a good~ish game, but needs some technical fixing up to do still.

Well as I accept your praise on the game I have to say it was my first game that i've ever done and The belly part was just to be as is Ireally did not want to keep making a different stomach for each girl thats why.Secondly I put my heart and soul into this game so not being a dick or anything but you have to understand that not everones perfect there first time.

Yeah, everyones a critic, be thankful Dracon_Kitsune didn't go on an all out troll attack. I've seen that over at Giantess City. He may have a few points points though. I suggest correcting some of the issues (such as character Defeat does not cause a game over) and re-release V2 of the game. I don't have time yet to play the game, but when I do I'll let you know what I think.

Thank you I did not know he's a troll whats a troll doing on Eka in the first place why don't he just go to youtube and rant about something damn trolls.

[Kobra]

It won't let me play, a file is missing.

[demon]

It won't let me play, a file is missing.

I know sorry bout that havivg difficulty with media fire wrjing on it thou.

[Dracon_Kitsune]

Sorry if I seemed a bit trollish there. I was trying to do a well rounded review, giving you some idea of things to fix if you continue on with this one, or make a new game. I make it a policy to, whenever I review something to give them both the things that I liked about it, and the things I think could be improved. I did like the game, it just needs a little refining in my humble opinion.

[demon]

Sorry if I seemed a bit trollish there. I was trying to do a well rounded review, giving you some idea of things to fix if you continue on with this one, or make a new game. I make it a policy to, whenever I review something to give them both the things that I liked about it, and the things I think could be improved. I did like the game, it just needs a little refining in my humble opinion.

Don't worry bout it fixed it up and should be better but i can't make the girls look bigger you and every one else will have to imagene them 106ft tall.

[MrX]

[Thank you I did not know he's a troll whats a troll doing on Eka in the first place why don't he just go to youtube and rant about something damn trolls.

Whoah! Wait a sec! I didn't say he was a troll, I said he could've Trolled. But I do agree with your feelings toward them.

Sorry if I seemed a bit trollish there. I was trying to do a well rounded review, giving you some idea of things to fix if you continue on with this one, or make a new game. I make it a policy to, whenever I review something to give them both the things that I liked about it, and the things I think could be improved. I did like the game, it just needs a little refining in my humble opinion.

Don't worry bout it fixed it up and should be better but i can't make the girls look bigger you and every one else will have to imagene them 106ft tall.

One way to make them look bigger is to make the player look smaller by useing a smaller sprite. I haven't had time yet to play your game yet, but have you done that?

[Luckless]

I keep getting a RGSS104e.dll could not be found error message when I try to play. I just reinstalled RPG maker. Any suggestions?

[Dracon_Kitsune]

I keep getting a RGSS104e.dll could not be found error message when I try to play. I just reinstalled RPG maker. Any suggestions?

You need to install RGSS104e.dll separately. I don't know why, but it is a common issue with rpg maker games.

[Luckless]

Wait I fixed it. There's two separate versions of RPG maker XP. 1.02 and 1.04. Download the latter.

It's working great now, can't wait to try the game!

[demon]

[Thank you I did not know he's a troll whats a troll doing on Eka in the first place why don't he just go to youtube and rant about something damn trolls.

Whoah! Wait a sec! I didn't say he was a troll, I said he could've Trolled. But I do agree with your feelings toward them.

Sorry if I seemed a bit trollish there. I was trying to do a well rounded review, giving you some idea of things to fix if you continue on with this one, or make a new game. I make it a policy to, whenever I review something to give them both the things that I liked about it, and the things I think could be improved. I did like the game, it just needs a little refining in my humble opinion.

Don't worry bout it fixed it up and should be better but i can't make the girls look bigger you and every one else will have to imagene them 106ft tall.

One way to make them look bigger is to make the player look smaller by useing a smaller sprite. I haven't had time yet to play your game yet, but have you done that?

Only problem with the smaller spite bit is one the contant shrinking and resizing would be a pain, but honestly i would like to do that.

[MrX]

Well, as soon as I play the game I'll be able to give you a few more suggestions.

[demon]

Well, as soon as I play the game I'll be able to give you a few more suggestions.

Aright.

[Dracon_Kitsune]

Well, in my next play through, I have another bug report. The first few vorers are glitched, putting you in the stomach wall. And, if you talk to the naga again, they will still challenge you. Also, most of the dryads say they eat you, but nothing happens. But the burps were a good touch.
One last thing, though it is a slight pet peeve of mine. Vore things, like games and interactive, where it just says "You are eaten and digested." I personally prefer something a little more descriptive.

[demon]

Well, in my next play through, I have another bug report. The first few vorers are glitched, putting you in the stomach wall. And, if you talk to the naga again, they will still challenge you. Also, most of the dryads say they eat you, but nothing happens. But the burps were a good touch.
One last thing, though it is a slight pet peeve of mine. Vore things, like games and interactive, where it just says "You are eaten and digested." I personally prefer something a little more descriptive.

Ok i'll look into it and fix the problems.

[BigD]

i'll wait for fixed version that doesn't have the .dll problem

[MrX]

i'll wait for fixed version that doesn't have the .dll problem

I seem to have that problem too. Which I find weird because I own RPG XP. Maybe I need to download an update.