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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Psycho_wolvesbane » Sat Sep 05, 2020 11:49 am

I can't view any of the Adult branch stuff as I get an immediate crash running the most recent version of vtw-1.0:

"I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 64, in script
jump choice1_adult
ScriptError: could not find label 'choice1_adult'."
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Natolin » Sat Sep 05, 2020 12:04 pm

SquishySofty wrote:Wew that's a lot of bad ends! 8O
While it's a very early development, it looks pretty good so far. The writing is excellent, and even though I'm not much of a fan of realistic photography, I think it looks good! I'll most definitely keep an eye on this development ❤

I do have some inputs in term of coding.
Spoiler: show
Though, as a Beginner/Novice programmer as myself, I think there can be issues whenever an incomplete choice branch can lead up to another layer without the return function or the Jump function.

Like an example: The label classroom_millie have nothing written, which leaves it empty. Leaving it empty would automatically proceeds to label miles_run and makes the story progressed in such a decision jump. Unless if it was intended as a follow up, that's fine. If not, then it's pretty easy to fix.

You could have like a text saying "This route is incomplete" and then sends them back to the previous decision. Like if the player chooses classroom_millie while it's incomplete, you could say that it's incomplete and jump the player to the previous decision, which is miles_reason. Maybe have the menu: function in another layer (Ex: miles_reasonC) so that the player won't have to sit all of the text skipping those that's already read. Then it wouldn't be a problem of the incomplete text jumping into unintended layers. ❤

Also, I apologize for skimming the source code without prior permission. It wasn't archived into one file while compressing, but I think you should take note of this ❤


Anyways, keep up the good work! ❤ :-D


Lols! Well... it's hard to have a good end as a guy in this world I guess ;P I'm glad you seem to like it, even though you aren't a huge fan of the style! :D
As for the programming thing... I guess I could do that, although the thing is well...
I guess its that I made this for myself originally, and I wouldn't need any kind of warning because I already know what is and isn't completed lol. I might consider doing it, but its just... theres so many empty paths that it would be a lot of work to have to add that at the end of alllll of the unfinished ones lol. I was thinking of maybe removing some like someone else suggested. (Although i would also appreciate if people actually read the spoiler in the original post where it neatly states which paths are completed.)
And hey, no need to apologize! It's not like it's hidden or anything xD If I really cared I would have tried to find some way of encrypting or some shit.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby theprinceh » Sat Sep 05, 2020 6:40 pm

Loving it so far, hope to see more.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby wasra1 » Mon Sep 07, 2020 8:28 am

It would be cool you make a poll to vote for uncoming path ideas :gulp:
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby bebopy » Mon Sep 07, 2020 3:32 pm

I'm excited to see this go forward. I was so hoping to be anally vored by the girlfriend
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Ackerlan » Wed Sep 23, 2020 4:39 pm

One of the shown preds is stated to be eleven... Isn't that against Ekas policy on underage morphs?
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Aleph-Null » Wed Sep 23, 2020 5:47 pm

19) No legally obscene material is allowed on this site.

a) We allow all non-explicit vore related fantasy illustration content. No exception regardless of the actual or apparent age of the fantasy character's appearance or other technicality.

b) Regarding explicit fantasy vore illustration involving questionable age of fantasy character: For the explicit versions, if you have legally uploaded them to another website, you can link to them from aryion.com only if accompanied by warning tags, and if the image uploaded to aryion.com itself is non-explicit.

c) There is no restriction regarding to creative writings or stories. They are all allowed.


From the rules.

haven't had a chance to play the game yet, but if the pred is not having sex then I think it's permissible.

EDIT:
misread the post.
1) All photographed can only involve personal unquestionably over 18 of age. No lower is acceptable.

From Photo manip rules.

I think this means the model has to be over the age of 18.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Ackerlan » Wed Sep 23, 2020 6:21 pm

Aleph-Null wrote:
19) No legally obscene material is allowed on this site.

a) We allow all non-explicit vore related fantasy illustration content. No exception regardless of the actual or apparent age of the fantasy character's appearance or other technicality.

b) Regarding explicit fantasy vore illustration involving questionable age of fantasy character: For the explicit versions, if you have legally uploaded them to another website, you can link to them from aryion.com only if accompanied by warning tags, and if the image uploaded to aryion.com itself is non-explicit.

c) There is no restriction regarding to creative writings or stories. They are all allowed.


From the rules.

haven't had a chance to play the game yet, but if the pred is not having sex then I think it's permissible.

EDIT:
misread the post.
1) All photographed can only involve personal unquestionably over 18 of age. No lower is acceptable.

From Photo manip rules.

I think this means the model has to be over the age of 18.

The model does not look over 18 in the slightest.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby player1 » Thu Sep 24, 2020 2:05 pm

If anything, here's my two cents:

the multiple starts, the general "vore-themed" slice of life and the general lack of a real goal aside from "surviving" is great and simple, m'sure it must be a boon for creativity even if i have a general anxiety over first time creators biting more than they can chew. I quite like the multiple bad ends! The Dialogues and writing quality is excellent, it doesn't feel too cheezy nor too robotic; Im a sucker for world building and never believed that a world like this one would hold up without any reformation means though.. but whatever.

All in all it's a real good first foray, hope the controversy it might generate doesn't discourage you from continuing. Keep on truckin'!
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Thu Sep 24, 2020 9:10 pm

I approve for the most part. I like the setting, even the fatal nature. Reforming was more a mechanic in my game to keep the story going and to give the money resource a meaning.

It feels like an interactive story turned into a visual novel which isn't a bad format. It makes for good, short contained stories. It's a good concept and it'll let you add content in short bursts and expand without much content colliding or needing to balance any mechanics.

The writing is also pretty good, no complaints there.

Although if you're using renpy and the atom editor I'd recommend turning on the spellcheck feature, it's great and saves me an entire step of copying into some editor with that feature and losing all my formatting.

Another critique is the programming. Someone else mentioned clever use of the jump command to loop players back from choices that aren't complete yet. Because otherwise there are very confusing jumps from one scene to another. Also your win screen doesn't loop back to the main menu like the game over screen does.

The only other thing may be a preference thing.... Using porn models is one thing but underage models... Personally I wouldn't feel right mixing that into a game with sexual tones. I have my own strict code in this so I may be biased by that and I don't want to push my own morality as being superior to anyone else's. This isn't deviantart though and you aren't hosting the thing here so there aren't technically any issues with any rules as far as I can tell.

That being said you should be prepared for intense criticism from people when you use underage models in a fetish game. You've probably been through this before though. And don't think this is me condemning you, it's not like I don't have my own fair share of controversial content, raceplay raises quite a few eyebrows but being a black man I won't apologize for what interests me. Still it goes a long way to clearly state where you stand, what your limits are and acknowledging that your content has problematic elements you wouldn't condone in real life, your title screen at least informs about it but doesn't really say where you're drawing the line on pictures of RL underage predators.

Also a lot of those backgrounds look awwwwwfully familiar! I even see the chalkroom one lifted straight out of mine haha :lol:

I don't mind at all though, it was just funny to see there in the files like "WTF How did this get her- ohhhh"

Good luck though it's a start.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby player1 » Thu Sep 24, 2020 9:24 pm

ryanshowseason3 wrote:I approve for the most part. I like the setting, even the fatal nature. Reforming was more a mechanic in my game to keep the story going and to give the money resource a meaning.


The main gripe i have with no reformation in such a world is that society can't really hold up if most of the active population disappears on a daily basis. The workforce would be way too slow or even impossible to replace as not enough graduates would be available; school itself is a battleground. Laws and regulations would be impossible to maintain; preds would end up targeting each other until the population shrinks to a point of no return. I may be just an overthinking dweeb though.
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Re: A Vore Torn World: A Vore Visual Novel

Postby Natolin » Thu Sep 24, 2020 11:17 pm

ryanshowseason3 wrote:I approve for the most part. I like the setting, even the fatal nature. Reforming was more a mechanic in my game to keep the story going and to give the money resource a meaning.

It feels like an interactive story turned into a visual novel which isn't a bad format. It makes for good, short contained stories. It's a good concept and it'll let you add content in short bursts and expand without much content colliding or needing to balance any mechanics.

The writing is also pretty good, no complaints there.

Although if you're using renpy and the atom editor I'd recommend turning on the spellcheck feature, it's great and saves me an entire step of copying into some editor with that feature and losing all my formatting.

Another critique is the programming. Someone else mentioned clever use of the jump command to loop players back from choices that aren't complete yet. Because otherwise there are very confusing jumps from one scene to another. Also your win screen doesn't loop back to the main menu like the game over screen does.

The only other thing may be a preference thing.... Using porn models is one thing but underage models... Personally I wouldn't feel right mixing that into a game with sexual tones. I have my own strict code in this so I may be biased by that and I don't want to push my own morality as being superior to anyone else's. This isn't deviantart though and you aren't hosting the thing here so there aren't technically any issues with any rules as far as I can tell.

That being said you should be prepared for intense criticism from people when you use underage models in a fetish game. You've probably been through this before though. And don't think this is me condemning you, it's not like I don't have my own fair share of controversial content, raceplay raises quite a few eyebrows but being a black man I won't apologize for what interests me. Still it goes a long way to clearly state where you stand, what your limits are and acknowledging that your content has problematic elements you wouldn't condone in real life, your title screen at least informs about it but doesn't really say where you're drawing the line on pictures of RL underage predators.

Also a lot of those backgrounds look awwwwwfully familiar! I even see the chalkroom one lifted straight out of mine haha :lol:

I don't mind at all though, it was just funny to see there in the files like "WTF How did this get her- ohhhh"

Good luck though it's a start.


I'm glad you like it overall! You're literally the main inspiration behind doing this xD so getting feedback from you is... fantastic... xD

As for the age thing... there was a huge controversy on this page that I guess you missed, but it got deleted, I really don't want to bring that up again and have people like... well... yell at me again :/ so... it's over and I would appreciate if people stopped talking about it :/

As for the programming... yeah, it probably is awful. I mean, its my first thing I'm coding like, ever. I appreciate the feedback though. I probably should go back and fix it, and maybe I will soon. I've honestly taken a bit of a break because that whole controversy thing really killed my motivation tbh :c

and LOL! The images and sounds folders I *literally* copy pasted from your game because it was easier than figuring out how to do it myself LMAO. Hope ya don't mind :P

Thanks! though! <3

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ryanshowseason3 wrote:I approve for the most part. I like the setting, even the fatal nature. Reforming was more a mechanic in my game to keep the story going and to give the money resource a meaning.


The main gripe i have with no reformation in such a world is that society can't really hold up if most of the active population disappears on a daily basis. The workforce would be way too slow or even impossible to replace as not enough graduates would be available; school itself is a battleground. Laws and regulations would be impossible to maintain; preds would end up targeting each other until the population shrinks to a point of no return. I may be just an overthinking dweeb though.


B-but... but my smut doesn't need logic ;-;

xD joking aside, I justify it with either "human gestation period has decreased significantly" OR... I just dont justify it xD
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