Shrinking stories 0.1

[xredzeroxre]

Hi! Im making a game with Shrinking Stories name
This game won't One big story but also it will contain many small separate stories.
First story completed: Unaware Family
I made a pictures with Koikatsu chara studio.


In a game: 3 animation scene/ 28 picture
Tags: Giantess, shrink, butt, crush, feet,smother,unaware,vore


If you are interested:
You get a access here: https://www.patreon.com/xredzero

Devianart page: https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -875420335
Report me a bugs.

[Dotsu]

I must ask is this only going to be released for patreon or will a free version exist?

[Crox]

First off, the deviantart link of the main post is broken, this is the right link: https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox
Second, 10$ to play a game made with koikatsu/chara studio? Really? uncensored deviantart images exclusive to patreon too? Look, sorry if I sound rude in this post and I hope you take what I say here as a critic, also I'm only talking about your koikatsu works since I don't know about the program that you use to make the more realistic stuff.
I taked a look at your gallery on the deviantart and the game images that you showed here, there are some good stuff, but most of them are flat in some way, as of the lack of scene effects, use of pre-made poses and animations (and let me say in advance, this is not exactly a bad thing, especially if used in a creative way, but good part of your works make pretty obvious that you're using pre-made poses) and the camera angle and position, also, while not really a bad thing too, your original characters look pretty basic, but now I want to talk about some of your works that are good, but could be even better with a bit more work on them.

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -803930642 - this one is pretty nice, the effects are good and the posing is nice too, but the camera position breaks it for me a bit, considering that the tiny is touching Lucoas butt I assume her butt is the main attention part of the image, so I think if the camera was closer and behind her, with a angle that maked the tiny look like a bug compared to her butt would be great!

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -836059312 - this is another good one, I really think the only thing needed to make this great is rotate the camera a bit so there is less empty space with the bed.

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -845383850 - this one is really great! especially the water, I loved how you did the water on this one, but once again, there is too much empty space with nothing.

But now I need to talk about the real bad thing, sorry for what I will say now, but I really don't thing your stuff is worth money, especially when there is much better koikatsu size artists on Pixiv and Deviantart that make content for free just for fun, I normally don't support using koikatsu to make money, but if you really want to make money with koikatsu, I seriously think you should get better first.

[Dotsu]

First off, the deviantart link of the main post is broken, this is the right link: https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox
Second, 10$ to play a game made with koikatsu/chara studio? Really? uncensored deviantart images exclusive to patreon too? Look, sorry if I sound rude in this post and I hope you take what I say here as a critic, also I'm only talking about your koikatsu works since I don't know about the program that you use to make the more realistic stuff.
I taked a look at your gallery on the deviantart and the game images that you showed here, there are some good stuff, but most of them are flat in some way, as of the lack of scene effects, use of pre-made poses and animations (and let me say in advance, this is not exactly a bad thing, especially if used in a creative way, but good part of your works make pretty obvious that you're using pre-made poses) and the camera angle and position, also, while not really a bad thing too, your original characters look pretty basic, but now I want to talk about some of your works that are good, but could be even better with a bit more work on them.

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -803930642 - this one is pretty nice, the effects are good and the posing is nice too, but the camera position breaks it for me a bit, considering that the tiny is touching Lucoas butt I assume her butt is the main attention part of the image, so I think if the camera was closer and behind her, with a angle that maked the tiny look like a bug compared to her butt would be great!

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -836059312 - this is another good one, I really think the only thing needed to make this great is rotate the camera a bit so there is less empty space with the bed.

https://www.deviantart.com/xredzerox/ar ... -845383850 - this one is really great! especially the water, I loved how you did the water on this one, but once again, there is too much empty space with nothing.

But now I need to talk about the real bad thing, sorry for what I will say now, but I really don't thing your stuff is worth money, especially when there is much better koikatsu size artists on Pixiv and Deviantart that make content for free just for fun, I normally don't support using koikatsu to make money, but if you really want to make money with koikatsu, I seriously think you should get better first.

Since the critiques have begun as a self employed game dev I have to agree although i am not familiar with the program koikatsu. But with what this person here (which hello dev of A tiny bit from home! nice to see someone!) But as for a game supported by patron not a good look most an i mean most games here on ekas supported by crowd funding (Take A way back home or Tsumi Umi Sushi) Have a free version you can try or have a patron an free version with certian content an features cut out. With nothing to base off the images provided broken links an id have to say kinda just well another gts game. No offense but your competing with Shrink EXP Tiny Misadventures an Shrinking fun an more you have to have a really enticing game for financial support. Id say make a free demo an continue with a premium version. Release it when its ready an has enough content. Sorry mate its what it seems like. Anyone here can disagree with me an say where they think i am wrong.

[Skittles209]

Any unbirth?