Datstrudel wrote:Zikik you mad lad, this is your best game yet. I hope you continue on this or do a sequel of some kind. (I was surprised to see an old sprite edit I did in this game. I totally forgot about my first Vore game. Lol)
A few suggestions I’d make are constructive I hope.
I think some dialogue could be improved. Some things like just up and asking to be eaten are fine, but I think there’s a few ways those could be improved. (I’d be willing to assist on the side with it if you wanted, since I do enjoy writing.)
I think more maw, throat, and internal belly shots would be cool to see.
This may be asking for too much, but perhaps more stuff to do on the side between school and home. Basically a bit more freedom. (I could totally see this being converted into a great RPG Maker game.)
Also, I kind of wish there was either a POV image of the players full belly or a sprite for the player. That would be a cool addition.
Also a bit of an odd spoiler question.
At the end of the Pred and Neutral routes, Sarah goes off randomly to be eaten by a friend or sharks. Are there more variations to this?
Yeah, overall a fantastic VN. Probably my favorite visual novel Vore game.
Glad you enjoyed it. I'm definitely going to keep everyone's suggestions in mind. I think maybe in a later project in the same style, I'll make it less linear so there's more directions the story can go. As for a visual for the main character, I designed a character in kisekae a while back that I'll be using for it whenever I get around to working on it. Of course, I got other projects that need my attention first, like adding music and sound to this and Feeding Them. But some of my non-vore projects are taking up most of my time right now.
And to answer your question:
Sarah is always going to be eaten if you're going to go on to the pred or neutral routes. If she hasn't been eaten by their mother beforehand, which is one of the possible RNG scenes on day 5, she will have her final conversation with her brother at the end of the sixth day. Of course, if she's eaten by their mother, you will not be able to see her scene during the prey route.
LazyLegion95 wrote:Just on question, is it not possible to have sound affects of someone inside of their belly? Same goes with you eating someone or someone eats you. Just saying it could enhance the experience.
I'm planning on it. While the story is complete, I've still gotta add music and sound effects.
EvilCloneofUnskilled wrote:I love this game, but I have some problems with how the RNG works. More specifically, I'm a bit annoyed about the fact that you can randomly get forced to one ending due to bad luck without any options to avoid it. While I under understand the enjoyment of your fate being left to chance, it would feel nice to at least have some option to avoid the forced rng for the scenes where you have to face the rng.
Originally I wasn't going to, but my brain one day just said "do it", so I did. At the very least, I made sure to have a choice right before any of the RNG stuff, to make it slightly less annoying.