GooInABox wrote:Interesting start, here's where I'd suggest you go from here:
-Fix up the spelling and text format. For some of the dialog, especially with the centaur, the text trails off the side of the dialog box making parts of the lines unreadable. For the spelling, I would suggest copying-and-pasting the current dialog and any new dialog you write into something with a spell checker such as Microsoft Word or Google Docs to verify the correct spelling as none of the RPG Maker titles comes with a spell checker as far as I'm aware.
-Prevent players from picking options that have not been created yet. I see that you did this with the second house in the town, but for the centaur's "fun" scene and the anal vore scene in the first house, choosing these options causes issues such as potentially breaking the game. I would suggest just inserting a quick dialog box saying the scene is a work-in-progress before using a label jump command to bring the player back to the dialog options so that the player's gameplay is uninterrupted if they try to enter a WIP scene.
-The art choice is an interesting style, it sort of reminds me of Ryanshow's game. If continuing with photoshops is what you want to do, then don't let me or anyone else stop you as what you have is fairly decent, but I would like to recommend that you check out either Daz3D or one of the two Honey Select titles. I don't think of myself as an artist type either: I can't draw anything decent for jack, but I've found that creating and posing digital humanoid models is rather intuitive and sometimes enjoyable. Plus, Honey Select supports absolutely huge boobs which could fit in well with the theme of your game.
-Add a little bit of music to the maps. Right now, things just seem a bit silent.
I'll be keeping an eye out on this game to see where it goes. Good luck!
I'm aware of the first two points and i was going to do that as well as add some music to the game, but tbh i ran from something that bothered me into the next and it just kept on coming. So at some point I just wanted to share it already,
just to see if there was even any interest in what i was doing at all.
I was thinking about doing something with digital models, I just didn't really know what to use. At first I was thinking Blender or similar, but the complexibility of that kinda threw me off. I kinda do like the photoshop stlye on one hand since it adds the aspect of using models that i enjoy and already have kind of a legacy, on the other it's always kinda building a scene after finding decent quality photos in the right angle fitting in with another as well as copyright i guess.
Amalgation was kind of an inspiration to even get this started - it's not like i haven't played good vore RPG before, i do very much enjoy MMA at example - as it was such a different approach and adding something to it that i kinda missed in all the others just as permanent change and expansion from the scenes. So yeah i have been playing with the idea of trying myself at doing something like that at one of your earlier releases.
Thanks a bunch for your feedback and i will try to figure out what style i will stick with after checking out those softwares, since I obviously can't do both, that would be hell of a mess.
