Truth of Submission 0.3 (vore,macro visual novel)

[laptya]

I decided to try making a game
The story in this game will be going around a school where students learn about how submission works and how to use it on others
More infortamtion about it is in the game.
Game is in early development.
More content will be added in the future. I'm planning on adding multiple endings, relationship system and other interactions between a tiny and biggo
Things that are in game right now:

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1.Female prontagonist
2.Player prey(2 scenes for now)
3.One observer scene where player watches other person get eaten and entrapped
4.2 endings for player
5.Shrinking
6.OV
7.1 entrapment scene for a player and observer

I am also slowly but confidently setting up relationship system. And already added scene which will happen only depending on your choice.
Still lots of work to do but i will keep going.

Screenshots:

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Download Link(windows):https://mega.nz/file/hlIQCKKZ#kE31NMyK1WbojOW0U7k2FtzKFBlwEJDg1cCEtvKRnug

Feel free to suggest me what content i could add or even type of characters.
I'm open to hear ideas and criticism. Main thing that game needs is other's thoughts.
Thank you for your attention.

[DragonqueenShyvana]

there stays player prey is it for the player only possible to by prey ?also i think its lame then when you can eat no one and is it even possible to see other vore scenes when my character is only prey ?

[theprinceh]

Looks interesting and see the potential, hope you keep at it.

[NinaNina]

looking good so far~

[laptya]

there stays player prey is it for the player only possible to by prey ?also i think its lame then when you can eat no one and is it even possible to see other vore scenes when my character is only prey ?

That's only temporary tag about what game has for now. I sure do plan to add player pred scenes in the future and also observer vore scenes too.

[KryOLynX]

Interesting, can't wait for whats to come

[Ermac]

I like it, thanks for this game and I hope it can have a lot of content. :

[laptya]

New update 0.2 is out for Truth of Submission.
This updates adds:

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1. 2 new characters
2. 1 player prey scene
3. 1 player pred scene
4. New gui and new font
5. Music

Download link(windows): https://mega.nz/file/U0RlnZYQ#dL23qlLON ... 19jWngRrYQ

Some additional information:

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I started to slowly set up things with flags, aka relationship system.
Thanks to everybody who liked the game and supported me.
I will keep up the work going.
Thank you for your attention.

[CaliTea]

I think the game is so far delightful! I'm really looking forward to seeing it bloom into something substantive ^-^

[umakeisee]

It's a good start. I always love to see people getting into making RenPy vore games. Good luck in the future.

[Liz]

Good start, I wonder if some of the predators might end up keeping other characters as pets (Sexual or non) or just devour them.

The uniforms are cute, honestly I'd love to see a sexy teacher in an office look devouring the player or a few of the class. Though its your game and I will enjoy it as you produce it. Thanks for the demo Keep up the good work.

[wariodude128]

So, I just played through what is there now and had some ideas.

1. Wouldn't it be interesting if whence someone submits to someone else and shrinks down to a tiny, the effect wears off a minute or so after entering a stomach? Either that or while in a stomach whoever ate you can will for you to grow back to normal, thereby letting a little weight gain into the mix during the endings.

2. I think having an avatar for this VN might be a good idea. If only so you can see "yourself" interacting with the other characters. Not sure how many you should be able to choose from, but I'd say five or six.

3. I think a little more explanation about the place your character decided to just up and pack their bags for might be a good idea. I mean, a mysterious magical place of learning you never heard of sends you a letter inviting you to take part in what it's doing would raise at least a couple of red flags for almost anyone.

That's about it for now. I actually wrote the script for another VN awhile back that had been abandoned and is now being worked on again. So if you need ideas of where things could go, you can always send a message at me begging for help. Might be able to give just the guidance you need to get back on track.

[DragonqueenShyvana]

there stays player prey is it for the player only possible to by prey ?also i think its lame then when you can eat no one and is it even possible to see other vore scenes when my character is only prey ?

That's only temporary tag about what game has for now. I sure do plan to add player pred scenes in the future and also observer vore scenes too.

ok , nice awsome

[wariodude128]

Thought I might as well bring up one other thing here which I didn't bring up before:

Air vents and places of that size are too small for normal people, but just the right size for a tiny. As a quick way to get around, maybe consider using it as a sort of fast travel system. New areas are only accessible by it whence you have gone there by "normal" means, so no sneaking in when you're not supposed to or unless made to by your submitted. Also, while in those small places, consider a possibility of danger every so often depending on location and time of day.

That's about it. Not too exciting, but it had been bothering me. Also, do try to think about what happens when two tinies meet. If a tiny submits to another, what happens? Does one of them grow back to normal size? Hopefully not while in a small space.

Alright, now that really is it. Hope things are going well with the "drastic changes" made due to my suggestions.

[laptya]

Thought I might as well bring up one other thing here which I didn't bring up before:

Air vents and places of that size are too small for normal people, but just the right size for a tiny. As a quick way to get around, maybe consider using it as a sort of fast travel system. New areas are only accessible by it whence you have gone there by "normal" means, so no sneaking in when you're not supposed to or unless made to by your submitted. Also, while in those small places, consider a possibility of danger every so often depending on location and time of day.

That's about it. Not too exciting, but it had been bothering me. Also, do try to think about what happens when two tinies meet. If a tiny submits to another, what happens? Does one of them grow back to normal size? Hopefully not while in a small space.

Alright, now that really is it. Hope things are going well with the "drastic changes" made due to my suggestions.

I will have too see which things will be added in the future. Still got a lot of things that i gotta set up and think through them. But i will note this suggestion for the future, thank you.

[pzkpfwittmann]

I played and loved the game, has a lot of potential.

Also If we could keep all the girls who submitted to us as pets at the same time, and eat them whenever we want... Just a suggestion. Hope you consider adding something like this in the future updates.

The game is great all the way, can't wait to see future updates.

[pzkpfwittmann]

I played and loved the game, has a lot of potential.

Also If we could keep all the girls who submitted to us as pets at the same time, and eat them whenever we want... Just a suggestion. Hope you consider adding something like this in the future updates.

The game is great all the way, can't wait to see future updates.

[laptya]

Another update Truth of Submission 0.3 is out!

Sadly i was not able to add much content for this update after so much time after last one. Had some things in my life that didn't let me work on game much.
Will try to add more content in the future.

This update add:

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1 new character
1 entrapment scene
1 observer entrapment scene

Download link(windows): https://mega.nz/file/hlIQCKKZ#kE31NMyK1 ... cCEtvKRnug

Some additional information:

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First of all i want to thank everybody who liked the game and left feedback, it really helps me to keep going.
Want to thank wariodude128 for suggesting some things for a story.

[laptya]

I played and loved the game, has a lot of potential.

Also If we could keep all the girls who submitted to us as pets at the same time, and eat them whenever we want... Just a suggestion. Hope you consider adding something like this in the future updates.

The game is great all the way, can't wait to see future updates.

I'm glad to hear that you liked this game. Not sure about the suggestion, since it might be hard to make it, but i will think about it. Thank you for feedback

[wariodude128]

Another update Truth of Submission 0.3 is out!

Sadly i was not able to add much content for this update after so much time after last one. Had some things in my life that didn't let me work on game much.
Will try to add more content in the future.

This update add:

Spoiler: show

1 new character
1 entrapment scene
1 observer entrapment scene

Download link(windows): https://mega.nz/file/hlIQCKKZ#kE31NMyK1 ... cCEtvKRnug

Some additional information:

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First of all i want to thank everybody who liked the game and left feedback, it really helps me to keep going.
Want to thank wariodude128 for suggesting some things for a story.

You are very welcome. I like to write a lot, so figured I might as well help out. By the way, if a tiny submits to another tiny, the latter is no longer beholden to who was their submitted. Especially if as I was on the fence about the tiny grows back to normal size. Perhaps then the (former) submitted would feel like they lost something without really being able to figure out what. The former tiny showing showing up at normal height would explain the feeling.