Hello, all. I am just posting to let y'all know that I have created a prototype for a vorish text adventure game.
https://nerytiajay.itch.io/a-voyage-on-the-nest
It's not much, but it is a proof-of-concept, if there is enough interaction with it I will make more. Otherwise I'll leave it as is.
Enjoy!
Voyage On The Nest
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Voyage On The Nest
by NerytiaJay » Sat Jan 04, 2025 9:23 pm
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Re: Voyage On The Nest
by BazBackup » Sun Jan 05, 2025 8:51 pm
AN interesting start indeed! I like what there is so far
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Re: Voyage On The Nest
by ScienceTiny » Tue Jan 07, 2025 2:49 am
It's looking pretty good so far, though the formatting could use a bit of work. Mainly, it needs more line breaks between paragraphs, sometimes the quotation marks don't surround the dialogue correctly, and there should be a line break between each choice when presenting the player with multiple options like in Fog's scenes.
However, the writing is quite good, and I'm already curious where the story will go. I think just a few changes to how the text is formatted would do wonders.
However, the writing is quite good, and I'm already curious where the story will go. I think just a few changes to how the text is formatted would do wonders.
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Re: Voyage On The Nest
by soonfrozen » Thu Jan 09, 2025 2:44 am
NerytiaJay wrote:Hello, all. I am just posting to let y'all know that I have created a prototype for a vorish text adventure game.
https://nerytiajay.itch.io/a-voyage-on-the-nest slice master
It's not much, but it is a proof-of-concept, if there is enough interaction with it I will make more. Otherwise I'll leave it as is.
Enjoy!
An interesting and intriguing opening, I look forward to the sequels.
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Re: Voyage On The Nest
by Krono » Thu Jan 09, 2025 6:37 am
Very nice! I enjoyed it! I do hope you continue it! 
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