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Postby CFTS » Mon Sep 26, 2022 1:47 pm

This story will contain lots and lots of sweaty feet of women and young girls getting savored and eaten by creatures and demons! The story should be written in english or german!

This discription is a litte bit all over the place, sorry about that.

It would be nice if someone could write me a story in which two women are traveling as kind of demon hunter and encounter bipedal creatures and demons on the way. These creatures do not manage to eat the women, but they will enjoy the women's feet, with all their senses. (feel, smell, taste, etc.) Later, however, a demon will manage to catch the two women and savor their feet and eat them. This last demon also has a name, his name is Solonus.


Solonus is a big fat bipedal demon, with rubber like, black skin. He has glowing eyes and glowing veins inside its maw, esophagus and stomach. Their colors change, depending on arousal and hunger. In a normal, calm mood, its eyes, maw, esophagus and stomach are ice blue in color. Has it picked up the scent of its prey, the color changes from blue to yellow, is it aroused, the color changes to orange, is it hungry and about to eat its prey, the color turns red. It is 5 meters tall and can schrink down its prey, if it wants to, to appear even larger. It only eats female humans and it is crazy about the aroma and flavor of sweaty feet.

Before eating its prey, it will first savor the feet of its prey. Looking at them, feeling them, smelling and licking them in great detail. To prevent the prey from escaping, the demon uses its demonic powers to make the prey float in front of the demon. This way, the demon can savor the feet as long as it wants, until the hunger gets too much. Or the demon puts one or more women in its maw, to lick and suck on their bodies, forcing them to walk across the tongue, and or cover their bodies in lots of drool. This demon loves watching its own drool, drip down from the feet of its prey.


The appearance and names of the women: Both should be no more than 170 cm tall. One of the women has long golden hair and blue eyes. Her name is Trixi. The other has long red hair, green eyes and is called Jessica. Trixi has size 4 feet and purple toenails and is 26 years old, Jessica has size 5 feet and pink toenails and is 27 years old. (Yes, I prefer (very) small feet.) Both of them have very well cared-for feet. Some character traits. Trixi is smart, clever, very skilled with her weapon and loves a challenge, which more than usual gets her in trouble and danger.Jessica is quite the opposite, careful and not so skilled with her weapon.

Elements I would like to have in the story:

1. Burping in the prey's face, or burping in general.
2. Teasing the prey verbally about what is soon to unfold.
3. Forcing the prey to listen to the pred's stomach at work, particularly by pressing the prey's head/face against their belly.
4. Drooling and slobbering all over the prey, especially the feet, in this case. It depends on the size of the pred. Big enough preds may force the prey to walk across the pred's tongue, to let the pred taste the preys naked, sweaty feet, also keeping the prey in the maw in general. (maw, tongue, drool play)
5. Teasing the prey by forcing them to look down the pred's maw.
6. Touching, tickling, squeezing the preys feet, telling the prey how delicious their feet smell and taste etc. Feet are very sensitive after all, and thus great for torture.;)
7. Forcing the prey to watch the pred eat another female humans or their feet. Soft or hard vore, with slurping, smacking noises, etc.
8. Pred uses prey's sweat, or sweat and drool covered feet to rub its body. ( mostly face, cheeks, chest and belly)

Some scenarios I would like to have in the story, more scenes are very welcome:


First scene should be a prologue scene, about Solonus' past.

The scene would be like this:

553 years ago, a demon summoned Solonus, to conquer the world of humans. After he had created Solonus, the demon opened a portal. This portal led Solonus into the room of 5 year old girl. Back then Solonus was much much smaller, than he is today, only about the size of a watermelon. When he arrived in the room of this girl, he saw her sleeping in her bed and he saw a foot dangling from the edge of the bed. Her small foot almost reached the floor of the room. But that wasn't the only thing he noticed, he also noticed a "wonderful" aroma in the air. At this point, he wasn't into feet but that would change very, very soon.

Looking for the source of the smell, Solonus eventually reached the foot of the little girl. He grabbed it and smelled between the toes for almost 3 hours. The smell made him hungry and the more hungry Solonus got, the more delicious the foot looked to him. Eventually Solonus bit into the heel of the foot, ripping it off of the foot, along with the rest of the sole off of the foot. The little girl woke up screaming and crying. Scared by this, Solonus left the bedroom and the human world, through the portal. After Solonus was back in his own world, he slowly devored the sole of the 4 year old girl, from heel to the ball, savoring every bite. And the memory about the look, feel smell and the taste of the girl's little foot remained in his mind forever! Solonus was now hooked to the smell and taste of female feet! A moment later, Solonus turned around, looked at the portal and went back inside, to get her other foot too. THis foot would become the first foot, he would attach to his necklace, as soon as he was big enough, to carry the foot around. Because even he ate the foot, he kept the bones and thus was able to regrow the whole foot.

Next scene: After the prologue scene, with a young Solonus, his creator, and the young girl, sleeping in her bedroom, there should be a scene with Trixi and Jessica still in the hostel, with a scene focusing on their feet. (Could be them just getting dressed, they give each other a foot rub/massage, or maybe a scene, with a small creature, doing a "quality check" for Solonus, while Trixi and Jessica are still sleeping. Or Jessica tickles Trixi‘s foot, after she got up and Trixi is still in bed. Or all of the scenes and more.


One scene would be something like this: At one point they would find something laying in front of them on the path. At first they couldn’t tell what it was but as they came closer. they could tell that it was the remains of a woman’s foot. A moment later they saw a creature‘s arm reaching for the foot. Then the creature came out of its hiding spot. Trixi and Jessica saw, that the creature was holding another foot in its other hand. Then the creature looked at the women and bit into the sole of the still intact foot, tearing of half of the sole, from heel to the middle of the arch. Then the creature stretched out its other arm, to "show" Trixi and Jessica the other foot. The heel and arch of this foot had been eaten, down to the bones, the big toe had been eaten too, only the ball of the foot, the small toes and top of the foot remained. Minutes later, they found the dead woman, laying next to the path.

Next scenario: Trixi collects firewood and in the meantime Jessica gets a visit from a demon in the camp. The demon manages to disarm Jessica and ties her to a tree. Jessica tries to kick the demon in the stomach, the demon grabs her leg, tears off her footwear and has fun with her foot. Before Jessica's foot becomes demon food, Trixi appears and kills the demon. After that there should be a somewhat short scene, of Trixi and Jessica sitting at the fire. At one point, Trixi should remove her footwear, to give her feet some fresh air. Just moments later, a mosquito-like insect would land on the ball of her right foot, just below her pinky toe. The insect begins sniffing the air around it and then starts walking across the ball of Trixi's right foot. It sniffs at every toe, until it had reached Trixi's big toe. The insect begins to walk across Trixi's big toe and eventually starts sucking. Moments later more of these insects land on Trixi's right foot and her left foot. They all do the same, land on the foot, sniff the air, until they have found a good place to begin their meal. And Trixi is watching it all and doesn't care for some reason. Even Jessica is doing nothing but watch them. Moments later the soles and the bottom of her toes are covered by these insects. (Note: Unlike with real mosquitoes, there won't be a hump on the skin, after the insect has finished sucking. The skin should remain flawless.)

Another scene I'd like to have is with them sleeping in a tent, while a creature savors their sweaty feet. Some moments later one of them would wake up from the sounds the creature makes and she would try to attack it, but, like the other woman, she is paralyzed and can't move. After the creature had savored her feet enough it will focus on the feet of the other woman. They can't do anything about it but watch and hope, that the creature won't eat them, which it wont, it just wants to savor their feet.

Next scenario: Trixi and Jessica are captured by several demons, the demons bring both women to their hidden camp. There both women are forced to eat a pair of sweaty feet of young girls, after Trixi and Jessica have been forced to smell and taste each others feet. Trixi and Jessica have to watch the feet getting roasted, before they will be forced to eat them. And they have to watch other demons eat raw and roasted feet. Each of the women must eat a raw and roasted foot. After Trixi and Jessica have finished their forced meal, one of the demons attacks Trixi and smells and licks her sweaty feet. The other demons watch the demon savor Trixi's feet. And before the demon could take a bite of one of Trixi's feet, the demon gets killed by the six women, along with the other demons. Then Trixi and Jessica get rescued.

Next scenario: The 8 women encounter a large creature, this creature uses mind control and makes the women think that it is raining and the creature is a cave in which the women can find shelter, the creature then uses mind control, "telling" the women to take off their shoes and walk barefoot on the creature's tongue. When the women enter the "cave", the creature will watch the women walk across its tongue, with its snail like telescope eye. It will watch the women, it will watch their feet, it will watch its drool drip down their feet. 4 other women will be there, inside the maw of the monster, these women will be swallowed or pulled inside the creature's stomach. A bit later, outside the creature, two more women will appear, to kill this creature. One of the women will distract the creature, by "offering" it her sweaty barefeet, while the other woman will kill the creature.

Next scenario: The 8 women reach their goal, the demon Solonus. They try to fight the demon, but fail and their feet end up in the demon's stomach.







Solonus is responsible for the dissapearence and kipnapping of young women, not older than 30 years, one of these women is the daughter of the King, princess Faya of Aynor. Reports of women, who somehow managed to escape and return home to the city of Aynor have revealed, what this demon is using the women for. The women are kept alive as Solonus' slaves or pets, or they get eaten by Solonus. Before these women are eaten by Solonus, the demon savors their feet in many ways. Solonus is known, to have a reputation for having a affection towards the feet of his victims. He considers the feet of female humans to be a delicacy, especally sweaty feet.

In addition to that, Solonus also has cast a curse on the area, surrounding a portal in it's center. This portal is used, to allow other demons to enter the Kingdom, and for Solonus to return to his realm. Solonus' realm is discribed as some kind of fortress, with a throneroom. In this room stands a throne, made entirely out of female feet. The walls and ceiling are also decorated with feet. There are cages in the throneroom. Decorated with feet, hanging at eye-level with the inmates.

The path outside, leading to the fortress, is decorated with the bodies of women, hanging from gallows. These women are hanged by their wrists. Most of these women have had their feet cut off and some of these women are still alive. There is only one path, that leads from Aynor to this portal.

Halfway, between the city and the portal lays the tree of feet. As the name implies, this tree is not a normal tree but a dead tree, with hundreds of feet hanging from it's branches. It's purpose?, a warning, to all humans, to not enter the area just beyond this tree.

The area beyond the tree is filled with demons. These demons are known to attack women, to smell and taste their sweaty feet. Some of these demons even eat their victim's feet. Some demons eat the feet, raw and alive, still attached to the woman's legs. Other demons cut off the feet, to eat them raw or roasted, over an open fire. The area where these demons roam, can only be entered by women. Men who try to enter this area, simply dissolve into nothing.



Some more info about Solonus and other things.

Solonus' design is based on this picture but more evil looking: https://gcdn.daz3d.com/p/14406/i/muck-for-genesis-3.jpg

Solonus has a cone shaped, dark blue tongue, with a secondary tongue under it. His secondary tongue is shaped like a worm and is used to lick between the toes of the women.

All feet that are hanging from the ceiling and cages, inside the fortress of Solonus are still alive and never decay, thanks to dark magic.

Solonus is wearing a necklace around his neck, with small feet attached to it. It is unknown if these feet are just shrunk down feet of women, or if they are real feet of young girls. The sizes of these feet are equal to feet of girls between age 4 and 8.

The tree of feet is holy ground to all demons and they gather there to feast on the feet on the tree.

The world on the other side of the portal looks like the surface of venus. https://www.extremetech.com/wp-content/ ... /venus.jpg

The balls of the feet are like a filet of the foot for the demons and especially for Solonus.

Solonus loves everything about sweaty female feet but the cheesy smell is what he loves the most.

Some info about Solonus' skin, when discribing it in the story.

Solonus' skin would look something like this.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/088 ... k.png?dl=0
And as I have mentioned before, his skin would feel like soft rubber. And as I have also mentioned before, the color of the glow changes. Their colors change, depending on arousal and hunger. In a normal, calm mood, his eyes, the veins inside his maw and esophagus, stomach and the glow of his body are ice blue in color. While he is smelling the sweaty feet of his prey, the color changes from blue to yellow, is he aroused, the color changes to orange, is he hungry and about to eat his prey, the color turns red.

And some bonus info about Solonus' nose. Solonus has no visible nose. The only thing visible are four vertical nostrils. The nostrils are arranged horizontal.


When feet get eaten by preds in the story, they should be eaten in the following order: First the heels get eaten, then the arches, then the pred would focus on the top part of the feet, eating the flesh from the ankle towards the base of the toes. Next the pred should eat the toes, either starting with the big toe, or with the smaller toes, and finally, the balls get eaten.

Of course the preds should savor every bite of foot flesh.

Some more little details for the story.

Very important! I want at least one very detailed scene of at least one foot getting eaten, from heel to toes. With as many parts of the foot or feet getting mentioned as possible. All five or ten toes, the sole(s), the parts of the sole(s) (ball, arch, heel, the fatty tissue of the sole, (especially the ball part), at least two of each, the muscles of the feet, the ligaments, the tendons, bones, etc, more are prefered. Especially Trixi's feet deserve a very detailed scene like that. ;) No need to use the latin names for the muscles, tendons, etc, but the overall function of the part should be mentioned. For example, if it is a tendon for the big toe, it should be named as such. But stay anatomically correct. ;) Don't invent parts of the foot that are not there. ;)

Solonus voice should sound something like this: he has a deep, boomy, disorted, demonic voice. Sometimes a bit difficult to understand to humans. And one more thing about him, he only eats feet raw, not roasted. Other creatures and demons sometimes roast sweaty female feet. But Solonus always eats feet nice and sweaty and raw.

The shape of Trixi's feet look like this, but with a lighter skin tone and nice pink soles and other women's feet should look similar, because it is Solonus' favorite shape of feet, because reasons. (This is important, in case the shape gets mentioned, in the story, in one form or another.) https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/41c ... 9.jpg?dl=0

The portal looks something like this, it is a red dome, it is glowing, 10 meters high, the pattern that can be seen on this dome is moving like water and the whole dome is rotating clock wise.

Side view of the portal: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/udl ... R.png?dl=0

Solonus' palace should look something like this, but without the glowing stuff and more blocky, not so round. Especially the top part. https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/e9q ... L.png?dl=0

Trixi should wear something in a color like this.https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/m7q ... L.png?dl=0 While Jessica wears something with a bluish green color.

This is the least what I want to happen, after Trixi and Jessica have entered the portal to Solonus' world. Feel free to add more details and scenes. First thing they will see, after they saw the surrounding world they are now in, are the women hanging from gallows, by their wrists. There are 24 women in total, 12 on each side of the path. They make sounds of suffering, crying for help and more. They also warn Trixi and Jessica, to not try to fight Solonus. Trixi and Jessica look at them in horror, they notice, that some of them have no feet, or feet that have been mostly or partially eaten by creatures. As they look at one woman, they notice, that something is moving inside the sole of her foot. A creature is eating this woman's foot from the inside out. Eventually this creature breaks through the skin at, what used to be the ball of her foot. Then this creature sniffs the air around it, turns around to face the toes and feasts on their flesh. Another creature, that can fly, lands on the ball of her other foot and bites into the ball, ripping of a big chunk of it, before eating it. Then it continues to feast on the rest of the woman's foot.

They notice another woman, her soles and the bottom of her toes covered by mosquito like insects, sucking sweat out of the skin, not blood. More than a dozen of these insects sit on each of her soles and many more are flying around her feet. Some of them can be seen sitting on the soles of other women, too.

Another woman can be seen, getting her left foot licked over and over again by a creature and getting her right foot smelled over and over again.

Another woman's feet are getting cooked over and over again, then getting eaten, then the feet regrow, to repeat the same thing.

Another woman's feet are getting roasted over and over again, then getting eaten, then the feet regrow, to repeat the same thing.

Another woman gets her feet cut open, skinned, and eaten, piece by piece over and over again.

Another woman's feet are inside a creature's maw all the time. In there, the feet are getting licked, wrapped in the creature's tongue, sucked on, submerged in saliva and more.

Another woman's feet get eaten by a creature whole or in pieces, always choosing random pieces over and over again.

The other women have no feet or only parts of their feet left.


And as much as Trixi and Jessica want to kill these creatures, some force prevents them from doing it, they can't help these women.



Something else could happen here, before Trixi and Jessica reach the palace. ;)


Later before Trixi and Jessica have reached the door of Solonus' palace, female feet can be seen, just floating there in midair, on both sides of the path, leading towards the palace. Then Trixi, Jessica and the other women, who had followed them encounter Solonus' guards. The women fight the guards, but all but Trixi and Jessica get killed. After they have opend the door and are inside the palace, more feet can be seen, floating there on each side, as well as piles of feet and creatures, as small as a big toe and as big as a big dog, feasting on some of the feet. One bigger creature, with a big round belly, about 50 centimeters in size, can be seen, laying on a pile of feet, holding one partially eaten foot in its hands. The creature looks at Trixi and Jessica, tells them that Solonus has been waiting for them, then he bites of the ball of the foot and begins to chew on it. Then the creature looks at Trixi's and Jessica's footwear and tries to imagine, what their feet would look, feel, smell and taste like.

Then the door of the throne room opens, Trixi and Jessica see Solonus, the throne made out of feet and parts of feet, he is sitting in, a table, with a bowl of feet, another bowl, with the bones of feet, a bottle of foot sweat, a cup and on the left armrest of his throne, they can see princess Faya sitting there, while Solonus is smelling and licking her feet like crazy. He is talking to her, telling her all kind of things about her feet, talking about their smell, taste and other things and they notice the strong, cheesy smell of all the female feet in the throneroom.

Eventually, he'll notice Trixi and Jessica, standing there, in front of him, while they look in horror at all the things they see in Solonus' throne room. All the feet on the ceiling and on the walls, the cages, the women in the cages and all the things, that have been made out of feet. The table, the throne, tapestry, a "carpet", leading from the door to the throne and more items made out of feet. It was a horrible sight!

Eventually, Solonus spoke to Trixi and said, "Ah, you must be that world famous demon slayer, I have been hearing about and who has killed my "creator" and "father" and now you are here, to kill me!" Then he should say some more things.

After he said that, Solonus got up from his throne and attacked both Trixi and Jessica. After several minutes of fighting, he eventually was somehow able to grab Jessica's right leg and hoisted her upside down into the air. "Drop your weapon, or your friend's feet will be my next meal!", Solonus told Trixi and removed Jessica's right footwear. Then he looked at her naked foot in his grasp, watching it, as it moved around in his grasp, drooling at the sight and smell of Jessica's foot. In the meantime, some of Solonus' minions enter the throne room with the feet of the other women, who had been killed in the fight with the guards.

"Surrender or I'll feast on her soft and tender foot flesh!" Solonus said, bared Jessica's left foot too, and began to savor the cheesy aroma of both feet. He then gave one of her bared lower legs and the sole of a foot a lick, loving the flavor of her sweaty, cheesy smelling foot.
Trixi had no coice but to drop her sword. After she did, Solonus pulled her towards him, with his powers. "And now, you'll offer me your feet!" "Do it nice and slow, tease me with your morsels!" Make me want to savor and eat them!", Solonus told her, among other things about her feet.

At this point, Trixi had lost and became Solonus' "toy". After Trixi had removed her footwear, nice and slow, slowly revealing her naked feet to him, and she teased him with her naked feet and he had savored them for the first time, with all his senses. (When Solonus savored Trixi's feet for the first time, Trixi had cold feet, keep that in mind.) Then he told her, "I could smell and lick these feet for hours, and I think, I will!" "Oh yes, I definitely will savor your feet for hours, Trixi, your feet are the most perfect feet, I have ever seen, felt, smelled and tasted and now they are mine!" Then Trixi had to watch Solonus feast on the feet of Jessica and princess Faya. After he had finished eating their feet, he savored Trixi's feet for hours, he even turned her into a 8 year and 4 years young girl, to savor the feet of a young Trixi. Before giving her her normal age of 26 back, Solonus shrunk down Trixi, put her inside his maw, where she had to walk across and dance on his tongue, for a long time, as a young and adult Trixi. After that, he enlarged her again and she had to go inisde a cage, for two weeks. In the first week, she had to wear her footwear all the time, to get her feet as sweaty as they can be. After the first week was over, Trixi had to leave the cage, and had to offer her very sweaty feet to Solonus. He then savored her feet for hours, before Trixi had to go back inside the cage, for another week. This time with naked feet. During these two weeks, Trixi had to watch Solonus feast on lots and lots of female feet, young and adult and whenever he could, Solonus looked at Trixi's naked feet. To keep her from starving, she had to eat feet too. She had to eat feet of young girls between 4 and 8 years young. On the last day of her two weeks in the cage, Trixi had to eat two one to one copies of her very own feet. One pair were the feet of her 4 years young self, the other pair was from her adult self. Every night, Solonus gave her nightmares about creatures and demons savoring and feasting on female feet, for one week. The second week, he gave her nightmares about creatures and demons feasting on her own feet. Every morning, a smaller creature or demon, will go inside Trixi‘s cage and will wake her up by covering her nose with the toes of one of the feet, Trixi has to eat for breakfast.

After the two weeks are over, Solonus will savor Trixi's feet again. Both as an adult woman and a young girl. Solonus kept Trixi for 4 years, before he eventually ate her feet one last time and killed her.
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Postby Hagglesmite » Tue Sep 27, 2022 10:57 pm

It... kinda looks like you wrote most of it yourself already?

I mean what's your budget for this? A lot of writers have their commission information on their home page.
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Re: Looking for writer of a hard vore story with a lot of fe

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Is your offer still up for grabs?
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Re: Looking for writer of a hard vore story with a lot of fe

Postby ConceptCorner01 » Sun Dec 18, 2022 4:57 pm

Hi!

If this offer is still available, I'm a writer who loves taking on challenges with their content! I especially like a lot of content revolving around feet, so this caught my eye. I charge 2 cents a word, meaning that it would be $100 USD for 500 words. I would ask that you look at my current gallery to see if you like my writing style enough to commission me. My private messaging is open on this site, or if you choose you can reach me by DM'ing me at @ConceptCorner01 on Twitter.

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