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Postby Theguythatdoes » Mon Jul 03, 2017 7:26 pm

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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby sn0riat » Mon Jul 03, 2017 7:37 pm

It's a good start! I'm unfortunately not really familiar with ms paint but gimp offers a ton of possibilities already and is completely free! Almost all of my stuff was made in gimp although i recently switched to Paint tool SAI. If MS Paint offers plenty of possibilities already though, then stick to that since youre already familiar with it!
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby hibbyjibby » Mon Jul 03, 2017 8:14 pm

Well, it's definitely a start for an artist. And, as an artist, we all need to start somewhere.

There's not entirely a lot I can suggest to get better at, seeing as the tools you have are truthfully VERY limited, and basic even with what it can do. So it might be worth looking into something more advanced than MS Paint. MS Paint is more of a jumping off point, and you'll be really hard pressed to advance as an artist with what you currently use. GIMP I find is far more useful for making textures for games, and I speak from experience, and if GIMP isn't able to work on whatever you use for art, there are definitely other options. If you like I can try and find them, link you to em, and let you find which, if any, you like. They'll all be free, don't worry. I will say though, that many artists, both Western and Eastern, use Paint Tool SAI for a reason.

I've also many videos and informational resources you can use as well, ranging from basic to more advanced stuff. But, I still believe your best course of action is to improve WHAT you have, both the program and tablet, if you used one, before changing your techniques and methods first.

We could always use more Male Pred artists, since it's nice to cater to more of the community that might be ignored. Keep at it, and don't get discouraged. The going will get tough if you want to get better, but nothing worthwhile is ever easy or simple.
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby delet609hw6bn3296 » Tue Jul 04, 2017 8:57 pm

Better than kphoria at least.

If you want a reasonably high quality image editing program, look for the GNU Image Manipulation Program.

It's basically Photoshop-lite.

https://www.gimp.org/
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Postby delet609hw6bn3296 » Tue Jul 04, 2017 8:58 pm

Theguythatdoes wrote:tried downloading GIMP, but it didn't work. BTW most of these are older, and the trap vore used a base


How on earth wouldn't it work?

It should.
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Emperor_Palpatine » Wed Jul 05, 2017 3:07 am

These are pretty good! You're off to a wonderful start.
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Borealis » Wed Jul 05, 2017 5:48 am

Really good for your first foray into vore work. Way better than my first attempts!

As others have said I think you would benefit from changing from paint though.
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Wed Jul 05, 2017 11:40 am

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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Thu Jul 06, 2017 11:29 am

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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Emperor_Palpatine » Thu Jul 06, 2017 5:33 pm

You should do M/F stuff with pregnant prey. :3
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Merodi » Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:14 pm

It's a good start! I worked with Paint for a long time, so I guess I could recommend using the pencil tool to make it look a bit more.. IDK, "elegant".
A good free program is FireAlpaca, maybe that'll work for you tho!
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:24 pm

Emperor_Palpatine wrote:You should do M/F stuff with pregnant prey. :3

the 3rd one from the top is pregnant, it's just hard to see
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:25 pm

thanks for the criticism.
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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Sun Jul 23, 2017 10:20 pm

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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby Theguythatdoes » Sun Jul 23, 2017 10:23 pm

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Re: guy makes MS paint art of questionable quality

Postby DeuceMicro » Thu Jul 27, 2017 6:09 pm

There are guys who are worse artists than you, an they're making successful webcomics. I think you did a good job, the key is staying consistent with it, be prolific
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