SATLOLF: Full Story Edition (May 2018 Updates)

[Datstrudel]

https://gamejolt.com/games/satlolf/266741

Check out this new vore game I've started making.
It's in demo/test build phase.
Be sure to PM me here or on Deviantart for questions or suggestions.
(My DA is Datstrudel as well.)

Edit: The newest update is out and it is probably one of the biggest I have added. I’ve added a combat system and multiple new scenes. There is a single conclusive side ending as of now. The next update should wrap up the main story, but I may start adding sidequests after that.

Also, with this new update, be sure to start a NEW game. The game has bugs if you do not.

EDIT: Find the newest version of SATLOLF here on mediafire.
(Gamejolt couldn't process it)
Be sure to start a new game for bug fixes.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/b5zdbzn6w ... ATLOLF.exe

EDIT: SATLOLF Unofficial Sequel!!

This is an interactive story I'll be working on to continue the adventures of Strudel and Serice! Make suggestions!

https://aryion.com/iss/page.php?story=743&page=1

[forumlurker]

You can't leave your own house yet. Is that intended?

[b5n]

going to try it i would leave a critic later

[Hansony]

well the idea is ok, the vore itself is rather short and could use some more scene description and (for me personally) especially the preds feelings as they digest, are they happy, does it turn them on, do they feel pleassure, do they start masturbating to the though of digesting him or because it feels arousing or do they get tired and just sleep while the process happens that sort of stuff, also bit few scenes it would be nice to see more then just 3 preds thought the few that are not just being copy's of the same event with different preds is something worth praising.

Of cause this is just my thoughts on it, if you have a different way you want the game to go then that is what is important, not what I think should happen.

[ryanshowseason3]

Things I like:
To the point, we don't have years of exposition dumps and gameplay before the good parts are available. In fact theres a bug that let mom get me before even walking out of the house. Pick up that water and boom mom'll eat you. Bonus points for photoshopping some pics as well.

Critique:
It's short, understandable. But the scenes are a bit skimpy. Could've used more description during and what happens after. I mirror a lot of Hansony's thoughts. As well as some more decription on what happens afterwards, especially for the endo. How does she live her life from now on? Is the character happy with it? I'm not too experienced with endo to know what to do here though. But it still feels like something is missing.

Carry on though, it's going good places especially with how fast I can get into the action and the casualness of it.

[Monopolus]

I like the casual nature of it, as well as the images and sounds associated with the vore acts. Could definitely use some more detail and content, of course, but I know it's just the first version.

[Psycho_wolvesbane]

Its a good start, straight to the good stuff, though as mentioned above this would benefit from a more detailed description of the sordid affair and aftermath (not necessarily scat if you're not into that but the effect you're death had on the pred.)

But if you open the chest with the magic water before you even talk to your mum then the Quest line to get food for her is broken and doesn't start, therefore you can't leave the house.

[CartoonVore]

You should post screenshots of gameplay, so people kind of know what sort of game to expect.

[mysta]

A promising start, I think the comments above highlight the main areas for improvement, mainly expanding scene descriptions. The bug with the chest at home is pretty major though, I nearly missed the whole game!

The SFX and edits are a good addition and the whole style and the ideas behind each scene are pretty nice. Glad I could lend some advice to helping you create it, and keep up the good work!

Mysta

[gates101]

this looks fun. do you need help with it

[Datstrudel]

The new update is out for Strudel and the Land of Lost Fantasies!
Several new events and bug fixes.
Also, a special thanks to justyourfood for providing art and script for one of the vore scenes!
And a thanks to BubbleKnight for playing this on his youtube channel. (Even though he discovered it by accident and I scarred him, lol)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcT3q8Pm4zE

Get the new update here!
http://gamejolt.com/games/satlolf/266741

[Bright]

That let's play made laugh out loud.

[Airinnann]

Would you care to share what sort of styles are in the game?

[Datstrudel]

Mostly Oral vore if that's what you mean.

[Archangel64]

could u put horse vore in your game?

[seeker39]

I like this game!!

It would be better if it get more detail.
For example, when get out from someone's body , add some effect sound or fart.

[Airinnann]

Mostly Oral vore if that's what you mean.

Precisely the sort of answer I was hoping for. It's good to give people an idea as to what methods and...other actions the game might undertake. Be it a warning that "Blah" might happen or not.

[Datstrudel]

Hey everyone! It's me, Datstrudel!
If you enjoy SATLOLF, please state any suggestions and ideas, as well as Bugs that you may find!
Thanks!

[DetonaTuto]

Would love to see some UB in there!

[Airinnann]

It might be a good idea to keep this to the original post, 'less things become jumbled and disjointed.