by DollyFailFail » Sun Dec 10, 2017 9:24 am
Alright, now that I'm awake, coherent, and have flushed the excess excitement from my system, suggestions...
Hmm, well the first I think would be to add personality.
I'm in no way saying to go full overwatch levels where even the way the characters hold their gun oozes with it, but I would like to see this Pheromosa act at least somewhat like we are informed their species does. Which is that they are minor germophobes who think our entire world is dirty. I'd imagine a Pheromosa being somewhat hesitant to actually eat something that came from our world, sort of like someone who eats only really healthy vegetarian food having nothing to eat but McDonalds, she(well okay, Pheromosa is technically genderless but the design is very clearly feminine so I'm saying she) will do it, she may even enjoy it, but she won't necessarily want to at first.
On a partially related note, perhaps she could have something similar to the bug type Z move, where she encases the opponent in a web cocoon(Yes I know she's supposed to be a cockroach and thus can't actually make webbing but she can do the Z move just fine so I'm rolling with it), I'm thinking of it being something like she can trap the opponent and then can attack them freely for a short time, maybe then if she eats them while they're cocooned she would be more happy with it because she doesn't have to touch or taste any gross Earth germs.
I'd also obviously like to see multi-prey, but that seems to take a good bit of extra effort, so I would be fine if you chose not to include it in the first version, or even at all.
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