JAIDEN2207 wrote:Hey Salamoun New idea.
Ok, you're actually improving, that's good to see. But there seem to be some fundamental problems with your idea design (at least when it comes to my game).
1. You really like to oversize humans. They function as normal people, normal breast size, normal butts . . . The only way they can get bigger then usual is by eating someone with certain part of the body. So for big breasts you have to breast vore someone, for big belly you have to eat or unbirth someone. You describe those as a natural growth but this isn't natural (again, in my game).
2. I told you you have so much races to choose from for their different properties, yet you still decide to use blown up humans. You used 1 giant but you tried to explain him as getting mutated to it again. Why? I have giants naturally, next to ogres and minotaurs and such. You don't have to try to explain them as being former humans.
3. You either underestimate player or overestimate enemies. I know that we have to provide some sort of challenge, but ideas from other people will always be side quests. That means that player can approach them at any level they choose and player will be able to fight gods in the late game, so saying a fight would be impossible is kinda a stretch as I don't think few guards could rival a god.
I actually kinda like the backstories (except for Carrie, same old basis as the other ideas) so I can see improvement on that regard. The idea overall is better, having to escape a jail with few temporary allies to aid you, I like that. But you keep throwing in the old stereotypes you use over and over again. Please understand that in my game, humans are just humans (with ability to eat whole thing the same size as them) in supernatural fantasy world with all kinds of mythical creatures that are mostly stronger then them and a wild arrangement of magic used all around. Forget your inflated humans with 50 people inside them if it hurts to eat one. You can have pregnant woman, but she'll be normally pregnant, you know like a real life pregnant.
I don't mean to hate on you and I'm sorry if I hurt you by this. I won't add this idea to the game, but you are showing improvements and I hope that you'll stop using the parts that are not really fitting and make something truly enjoyable to read and play in the game. But if you're bound on seeing oversized woman fight (size like if player eats the bar), then I have to disappoint you as you would have to look elsewhere.