Samus vs Worm (flash animation)

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Samus vs Worm (flash animation)

Postby xLokix » Mon Nov 05, 2018 9:01 am

Hello friends!

I've played a bit with SFM and I've created this short flash animation:

https://www.deviantart.com/xxxxlokixxxx ... -771351421

preview:
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Hope you like it! :gulp: :-D
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Re: Samus vs Worm (flash animation)

Postby necryel » Mon Nov 05, 2018 3:02 pm

A very good submission. smooth movement overall. However, the LONG black screens are something I would avoid in the future. Try instead a fade-to-black approach, rather than an abrupt black screen. For instance, push the models off camera, fade out, brief (1-2 seconds at most) black screen, fade back in, bring the action on camera once again. It is less halting for the audience, and is a more professional approach to denote an unseen passage of time.

Good luck with future animations
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