RainArt wrote:I do loosely have an idea of what I'm going to do to finish the series, but even still- If you'd care to share them, I'd love to hear your ideas. I can't guarantee that I'll be able to do anything with them, but I would still like to hear them though. (3D rendering is an amazing media, but it still be pretty limiting sometimes.)
First, let me say that it was the dialog, and the scenario (That Cayli went in caring about her friend Cyan and Cyan instead took her friend and ate her), while the renderings only helped.
Mainly, this is probably due to the fact she used magic to shrink her friend, which spiked Cyan's hunger.
I think it's really about the powerlessness that Cayli had when confronted with a much larger friend as well as the betrayal.
Her begging for her friend not to do what she's doing, yet she continues and finishes swallowing her. And of course, Cyan saying she didn't feel anything swallowing her friend... possibly because of the magic changing her.
Within specific universes, like Marvel for example, using magic can change a magic user's body. This could also include the way the mind thinks and over using magic can have adverse effects if you're not trained well enough to use it.
But yes, my thoughts for finishing the series are probably in line with where you're going. When you said "being too violent," or "disgusting," I didn't bat a single eyelash.
So, if you'll have internal shots and the dialog between Cayli and Cyan ever prevelant, I'm sure I'll thoroughly enjoy what you put together.
And I know you stated that you want to cater to feedback, but honestly I wouldn't build to much on that. You really need to do what YOU want to do. Trying to appeal to one specific community fetish will only limit you and not allow you to fully express. I've seen artists get pressured into not fully expressing what they want because individuals in the community lash out when they go the route of say, disposal and scat. Or the opposite, where a portion of the community who do like it then pressure the artist to try and add digestion, disposal, watersports, etc. to their artwork.
What I'm saying is, do exactly it is you WANT to do. You've already got my attention because Shrunken Cayli and though I said your first 3 comics didn't do it for me, doesn't mean I'm saying don't do them. If that is your passion, still do flush vore, monsters/f, etc. When create works of art from stuff you like to do, you'll last a lot longer than being forced to do something you really don't want to do.
I may be rambling, but it's what I do
And I said earlier that the renderings helped... They're really good, and you stated something about them being limiting, and I agree. However, even if you cannot do anything and everything with what you can render, the dialog and the story you also added makes up for it. So long as you add that element, your renders will always compliment your story rather than the other way around. You can actually convey everything in writing without images and allow the reader to imagine everything. Again, it was done well with Shrunken Cayli.
But yes, I cannot wait to see what you come up with when it comes to your renders, you're dialog (to me is important part), and scenarios you put together.