Wow here it is!
I'll be posting my comics here for criticism!
(Anything older than the newest one will just be a link, only the newest will be viewable on here, so as to not make this post ridiculously long.
Petra Brings Lunch! Which of these Shading Styles Is better?
(also any advice on shading would be much appreciated)
Ashley Commits a Crime (F/F, Oral, Same Size, BBW)
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573120-97953-413eym-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573729-97953-52njv4-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/573879-97953-5dq2bt-preview.jpg
https://aryion.com/g4/derivative/574387-97953-68wd5c-preview.jpg
A Wail Of A Time (F/F, F/?, F/Pokemon, Oral Vore, Weight Gain, Smaller Pred, BBW)
Requested by https://www.deviantart.com/killifishy (He draws cool stuff)
(This is with some new fancy Faber Castell Pencils. That I can't sharpen, because my sharpener doesn't have stronk)
https://aryion.com/g4/view/576112
https://aryion.com/g4/view/576277#item-itself
https://aryion.com/g4/view/576296#item-itself
Gardevoir Gut (F/F, F/? Pokemon/F Oral Vore Weight Gain, BBW, Digestion)
https://aryion.com/g4/view/584202
https://aryion.com/g4/view/584290
Help with shading!
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Help with shading!
Last edited by DefinitlyOrginal on Wed Feb 26, 2020 5:04 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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DefinitlyOrginal - Been posting for a bit
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Re: My first vore comic!
Very nice
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Straxacore - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: My first vore comic!
I like how you work on different angles. I think you're off to a pretty good start.
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Re: My first vore comic!
Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...
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Re: My first vore comic!
You definitely have talent, I like your artistic style. You should draw on Bristol board in pencil and ink over it, Faber-Castell Pitt pens have India ink and a set of four has four different sizes, including a brush pen to fill in large areas.
Have you ever considered macro/micro F/m vore?
Have you ever considered macro/micro F/m vore?
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Re: My first vore comic!
I really like your style too, but have you ever considered hard vore?
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Re: My first vore comic!
sweetladyamy wrote:Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...
"quick"
ha
hahahah
HAHAHAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
I wish
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DefinitlyOrginal - Been posting for a bit
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Re: My first vore comic!
SamuelOrona wrote:You definitely have talent, I like your artistic style. You should draw on Bristol board in pencil and ink over it, Faber-Castell Pitt pens have India ink and a set of four has four different sizes, including a brush pen to fill in large areas.
Have you ever considered macro/micro F/m vore?
Thanks for the advice!
Also macro or micro aren't really my thing, i may do it on ocassion, but the closest i'd do on a regular basis is probably,
70% same size or bigger prey
20% Small size difference
10% Macro Micro
But seriously, thanks for the advice, i had no idea what literally all of those words were until now.
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DefinitlyOrginal - Been posting for a bit
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Re: My first vore comic!
Litenosöt wrote:I really like your style too, but have you ever considered hard vore?
1. Thanks!
2. I have but i probably won't do it very much.
EDIT:
Just now realised that aryion doesn't give you a notification when someone replies on your thread.
Also realised i didn't need 3 posts to quote multiple things woops
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DefinitlyOrginal - Been posting for a bit
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Re: My first vore comic!
DefinitlyOrginal wrote:sweetladyamy wrote:Not bad, not bad at all for a quick line art sketch...
"quick"
ha
hahahah
HAHAHAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
I wish
What I meant was that it's just carbon to paper, nothing fancy or anything. 'Simple line art' may of been a better fit but quick sums it up better.
In any event, keep at it. Practice makes better.
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Re: My first vore comic!
i like it
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Re: Edit: Second Vore Comic!
A Wail Of A Time (F/F, F/?, F/Pokemon, Oral Vore, Weight Gain, Smaller Pred, BBW)
Requested by https://www.deviantart.com/killifishy (He draws cool stuff)
(This is with some new fancy Faber Castell Pencils. That I can't sharpen, because my sharpener doesn't have stronk)
Requested by https://www.deviantart.com/killifishy (He draws cool stuff)
(This is with some new fancy Faber Castell Pencils. That I can't sharpen, because my sharpener doesn't have stronk)
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DefinitlyOrginal - Been posting for a bit
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Re: Help with shading!
I say whichever of the two you like best.
The latter of the two looks nicer, but the former provides more shadow.
The latter of the two looks nicer, but the former provides more shadow.
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