Oral vore~

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Oral vore~

Postby LewdoDoodle » Fri Jul 31, 2020 11:34 pm

Here is my first digital vore drawing hehe I hopw you like it<3~
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Re: Oral vore~

Postby Frakass » Sat Aug 01, 2020 2:44 am

This is very cute and a pretty good start : my own first uploaded vore drawings weren't that good ^^;

There is still -but it's true for the whole career of any artist- room for improvement, but the general proportions are great, and details are not bad either. I like the vivid coloring, but I think your shading should "sharper" (with more contrast between light and dark areas), and you should apply the "top light" rule (just think that the light come from just above, and start by shading everything that is on the bottom side, them add shading to spots obscured by bodyparts or object above them, like you did with under your pred's belly). It's just my very own opinion, so don't stress yourself about that, anyway :wink:

Welcome among the vore artists : I hope you will continue and create a gallery here on Eka's portal! :)
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Re: Oral vore~

Postby JaredTheCat » Sat Aug 01, 2020 8:35 am

The pic looks really good. Here's to hoping you do more!
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Re: Oral vore~

Postby PastarinoDongarino » Sat Aug 01, 2020 5:46 pm

It looks great to me, and I love how you can see the prey's facial expression :D. I can't wait to see more from ya :D!
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